|Reviews for Five|
| lealila 3/10/13 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. Love how you ended with a quote, and gave Calypso and Davy Jones an ending, as well.
| Perfect Mistake 12/7/09 . chapter 1
It really brightens my day to see a new review on one of my stories, and I promised myself that I would actually start reviewing the stories I like, instead of just reading and/or favoriting them.
And believe me, I really, really enjoyed this piece. It's short, but it basically conveys everything that should have happened in the last movie ( I wish lol) beautifully. It's very realistic, and I can imagine every single last one of the scenerios happening in cannon. So congradulations, dear, you've created a wonderful story.
| ills 6/11/09 . chapter 1
You have to be one of my fav writers! Great fiction!
| iluvchocs 10/15/08 . chapter 1
I really liked how you showed how Will felt in all this. And the way Elizabeth ended up makes more sense than her being a pirate/adventurer for three years, then suddenly being happy to get pregnant and settle down on an isolated island waiting for Will to come back once a decade . . . Great job :D
| Innocent Innuendo 9/3/07 . chapter 1
| Miss Anonymous 8/1/07 . chapter 1
So, the story goes like this: I'm basically madly in love with you.
That was a pretty good one, right?
| Elendraug 7/5/07 . chapter 1
OH JUST KEEP IMPRESSING ME, WHY DON'T YOU.
Man. Seriously. AWE got cut so, so short. : and with no closure for like. anything.
Pure and total win, with a huge heap of WORD. My favorite thing about your writing style is how you manage to be vague but flawlessly descriptive at once - the reader gets a clear understanding of what you mean without being bombarded by unnecessary, bulky sentences laden with too many adjectives.
And you win about a hundred internets for liking Jack/Elizabeth.
| primadonna001 6/6/07 . chapter 1
lovely - i suppose dreaming is what fan fiction is for
| mynightshining 5/29/07 . chapter 1
These are the ending that makes my heart hurt, and they should have been on that screen. Loved the second, just spot on Sparrow. The third one made my heart ache and the fourth teared me up. Excellent. Good stuff. Good stuff.
| Gladiel 5/27/07 . chapter 1
:D This is LOVE. LOL.
| MyPhoenixLament 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Aye, and there be the endin's I needed. XD Thanks for writing this. It's the proper sort of conclusion which the movie lacked...
| Tox 5/27/07 . chapter 1
I'm out for Disney's head on a platter too. Damn them for giving me so much hope last year! I should've known better :(
Thanks for writing this. Le sigh.
| Rurouni Star 5/27/07 . chapter 1
I love you. Always. I needed a better ending after those three hours.
| MuslimBarbie 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Aw! These are really good. The second one has to be my favorite though. Good job!
| Icelands 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. VERY. I like your writing style. Please, keep writing!