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| Aramira 2008-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it a lot, very realistic and interesting. |
| tyututu 2007-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nicee. but i must wonder, why is bobby looking for rogue? hm... |
| bewize 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was fantastic! I really enjoyed this. :) |
| Lady-Myrrh 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this, I think you nailed Piotr's character. I look forward to reading your other work. |
| Heather 2007-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally great little story!! |
| pashtess 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. I only saw XMEN3 once, but I do remember that Piotr was carrying a TV in the hallways. I smiled as he was unpacking the TV, so responsible in where he puts all the recyclables. hee. Great story. You are the only writer out there that nails Piotr spoton. :) pashtess |
| darkstorm5000 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseCool short ficlet! In just over 10 words, you managed to put a smile on my face that worth each and every one of them. I really liked the Piotr/Rogue conversation, seems like the kind of friendly interaction one would expect from them. Despite appearing to be so different, I've always thought there would be a few similarities in their personalities that would allow them to relate on a one-on-one level. Plus, this would've made one awesome deleted scene... |
| Protector of Canon2 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of Piotr being forced to waste money. |
| blue-fuzzy 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abusei love it! so cute, but for amoment there, i thought it was going to be like a Piotr/Rogue relationship, because for a moment in the comics there was a small spark between them. |
| Starsinger 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseVery insightful to the motivations of both Peter and Rogue, if a little naughty, and I like naughty! lol |
| Lilith Osborn 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseCool, I really liked this. You don't see much of Piotr in the movies and this lets you see more to him than his power or muscle clad arms. Great job! |