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Reviews for: Invisible Love
EmoUsagi
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
...i love how in the summary you put "oc character" it made me laugh...uh...sorry...i reviewed before reading...still...it was slight comedy and it made me laugh
phantom1ntheshadows
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
I hate to say it, but this fic is HORRIBLE! she totally is a mary sue, you obviously don't know how to use spell check, and for god's sake learn how to write! I think a braindead monkey can do better than this!
Okami
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
Ano...Kakashi oneshot, character name...Talim, age 24, plot...Talim is a Anbu mist nin, and gets transferred to the leaf because Tsunade actually had a winning streak against the Mizukage, she gets assigned as part of team Kakashi to even the numbers...Kakashi gets his book burnt to a crisp, You get the picture. Talim is fairly tall, Has shoulder length jet black hair and emotionless crimson eyes. Her skin is a golden bronze color, And she wears all black. She likes scaring those below her with her abnormal love of fire and sharp, shiny, pointy objects. Ano, yeah...that's it, but if you want to e-mail me, call me Okami in the subject area or I won't open it. I get a lot of spam.Ja Ne
k
2007-06-18 . chapter 1
how about you try an isarabi(a filler ark charecter from the anime) oneshot with naruto

when naruto leaves isarabi tries to tell him good bye and when naruto gets back he and isarabi meet again and spend the entire time together. and eventually they get fellings for eachother.
contour
2007-05-31 . chapter 1
That was cute! I really enjoyed it!




Name of the character: Kankurou

Name of the other character: OC character: Mika

Age: 15

Plot: old friend of the family comes over for a visit; few flashbacks to when they were little; Kankurou realizes why he was given so much special treatment; fluff ensues...(I'm making myself laugh...XD)

And character discription: short curly red hair, honey brown eyes, 5'4"; very happy person; thinks the best of everyone; treats everyone like kids
Ekonika
2007-05-29 . chapter 1
Hey! I'm looking around for Naruto and OC stories, and yours is the first! For that, I thank you. Good story! ^_^
Terra-kun
2007-05-28 . chapter 1
That was so sweet! I love how they're best friends as well as lovers. One thing, you need to check over some of your writting because it's missing the last letters on some of the words. Also there is alot of 'he' where it should be a 'she'. Hope im not being to much of an annoyance!

Oh yeah, you take requests right? Well Here we go:

GaaraXTerra(OC)

Age: Terra:15 Gaara:16

Plot: You can decide as long as it's something funny but with love at the same time ^^

Character description: http://pic7.
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