 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 5Thank for for these wonderful stories and what fantastic writing skills you have shown here!
Wispr |
 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 4Man you write mush so bloody well!
Wispr |
 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 3You are doing bloody fantastic with the character development in this story. Just love how real their intereacting is. Good work!
Wispr |
 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 2Lover how you wrote Shego in this chapter, it was easy to imagine her acting like that!
Wispr |
 Wispr 2008-05-06 . chapter 1Grand kids... nice, very nice. Also like the who the kids pict as life partners.
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 Heitomos 2007-07-12 . chapter 1I've beed reading this and it's very good, but one thing has thus far confused me. “You can thank Sheki, she’s played the bigger role.” He grew serious. “When you told us the news about Anna and Kasy, well, she came to me with the idea the very next day. They deserve to share in the same happiness we’ve had with our horde…” He paused mid-stride to stoop and give his offspring a quick squeeze. “So whatever part I played, it was an honor.” What does he mean by that? Did Kasy and Anna have kids or something, because I haven't seen them running around yet? Did he help them somehow? |
 Daryl 2007-05-31 . chapter 5this story is wonderful |
 Invader Johnny 2007-05-29 . chapter 5Ok so we finally come to an end in your Kigo-verse, it was good while it lasted I must tell ya that.
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 King in Yellow 2007-05-29 . chapter 1I wrote a review for this yesterday, a couple chapters in. FF.N was eating yesterday's reviews so it got lost. I'll write more when I finish this. Wish I could remember what I said yesterday. I know it was good but don't remember specifically what I wrote.
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 Invader Johnny 2007-05-29 . chapter 4Well if ya ask me its about time Anna's parents entered the picture.
Aw, the ending of the chapter was SO romantic, Shego is defenatelly losing her touch.
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 Charys of the shadows 2007-05-29 . chapter 5great story! The gang is huge now, so many babies, i love it! x |
 my gaurdian HaruHara 2007-05-28 . chapter 4dancing on the roof that sounds like great fun
his story is still so funny and that mantel image of shego standing in front of a giant cake was funny and it made me hungry for cake |
 Invader Johnny 2007-05-28 . chapter 3Ya know I was sorta hoping ya would write a chapter involving Sheki and Shego's argument of what happened with Alexander.
I would have defenatelly pay to see THAT.
Well I agree what kinda name is Walter?
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 Invader Johnny 2007-05-28 . chapter 2Ok Shego IS the craziest and sligthly sadistic woman on the planet, heh this defenatelly would be something the Shego from the cartoon show would do.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 creativetoo 2007-05-28 . chapter 3Cool chapter.
Are we gonna see any of Ron and Bonnie? They've raised a wonderful son and Sheki's lucky to have married him.
Sheila and Ronnie are adorable.
Can't wait to read more. |