coolness, very origonal luvs it! 5 stars!

Emotions: 9/10
Visualization: 6/10

Well, it's a good story, but I just can't see this happening. I had to concentrate really hard and I couldn't see anything until around ten minutes after I read the entire thing. See ya, general.

Oh and Rufus x Tifa RULES!!

Wow that was really good! I read it all in one go. Cloud x Aerith 4EVA!

Wow. This story had a very good and origal story plot. I'm not sure that I would ever be able make up a long story like this. I think you should get more reviews that you have.

The whole other Other universe was very interesting and you did make it seem too crazy. I also loved how you used names from Kingdom Hearts for the children. Plus I'm pretty sure that there is a story that Yazoo is a good guy.

I loved it! bye!

This was an awesome story. The ting I loved about it most: Zack was alive.

XD

This was very good. It's nice to see a story full of plot-twists that actually go somewhere. And I'm glad Zack and Aerith aren't really dead. :-P I feel bad for Kadaj. He's very misguided. Anyway, great story. I really enjoyed it and everyone seemed very much in character. :-D

Awesome story! Very creepy... Will you be doing a sequel?

Awesome story! Love it!
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Wow! I really liked this story! The twists and turns in it were brilliant. A few typos in some chapters but everyone makes a couple of those, nothing to worry about.
I really loved this.
Hee hee Sora and Roxas are so Cloud and Aerith's children. I mean seriously, the features and everything lol. Square arent telling us something Lmao! xD
Anyway good story. Is the question mark after "the end" hinting a sequel?
~Beeria

I decided to log in after all xD
hee hee Zack in bunny slippers! And Yazoo in flipflops? lol!^_^
I really like this. Very interesting and original, though the names remind me of a story named "Kids" but this is a completely different and darker story.

oh! I liked this chapter! I have to go and read chapter 3 now to see if he's alright!

I was laughing at the start where it was like "Cloud hated this" and "Cloud hated that" lol. That's Cloud. xD
Off to read the rest
~Beeria