“Or non-surgically joined at the hip by some other means.” made me laugh out loud. But now I'm sad, because I've reached the end. I'm really bad at waiting... alas! And I've realized that you haven't updated for half a year, which I suppose means it will be a while yet before you do so again. D:

But what you've got is absoultely lovely and worthwhile. Thanks for posting, and if you decide to add more, I'll be super thrilled!

Oh no, I wasted my review for chapter 1 last night! D:

Okay, so for chapter 1, I absolutely loved "And if they were going to, they could do it wherever they liked in the afternoon before your dad got home from work. Stopping them from sleeping in the same bed at night is pointless."

Reading chapter 2...

Aww!! They're so cute, Dairine and Roshaun! .>

Oh my goodness, there's a sequel. Definitely reading this tomorrow.

please update soon!
i got on this fic thinking it would be all romance but this actually has a pretty interesting plot!
i cant wait to see what will happen on mars or how kit will relate to Abernathy.

very very very good...now update!

Keep writing. It's good. Not out of character or pointless fluff. You're doing a good job. Keep it up.

ooh, interesting. using the idea for the new book that's supposed to come out sometime this year...i like it so far! didn't realize u'd written a sequel!

i have to agree with my logged out self.

Dont be silly. of course people are still reading.

Wow, great story! You have a talent for inventing plausible and realistic plotlines. In fact, if I didn't know better, I might have thought that I was reading the next installment in the series that was actually written by Diane Duane! Your style is very good, as well. Even if you don't continue this particular story (though I think you should, it's excellent so far) keep writing! You have a gift!

So good!

i really like the plot, i think i enjoyed the first one better but maybe its because i just like Dairine/Roshaun better... :) anyhoo i enjoy your style of writing and hope you update soon ( hopefully with just a little more Dairine/Roshaun action ;) ) thanx a bunch!

Dear teen typist, your work has been one i have followed since its start in the world of Diane Duane. Please, please, PLEASE do not give up on this series, it is such a promising one. I love this series and really want to see you carry through with it. Indeed it is something of a habit with me to check each month for a new update in this area. Forgive me for not writing sooner, but please don't give this series up!

I'm still reading! Please don't drop this story, it's so difficult to find a decent pairing writer...less so in the diane Duane fandom, but still).
I really like the "Callahan girl" jokes, you characterization is good. My only suggestion so far is to proofread carefully before posting--there were a couple homophone issues or typos.

Jeez, are you kidding? This is like the only Young Wizards fic on I actually like. You have the core characters down pat--Dairine and Roshaun work off one another so well, and Kit and Nita are so tightly bound together, and it all just works so well. And with the possibility of S'ree or Filif showing up, I'm even more excited to read on! Thanks for continuing on this. Every update's a gift, you know? Fabulous work, well done.