this is a great story i have one question though did you get this idea from yugio by any chance ?

please dont give up on this fic!

:D I'm happy you liked my reviews, I like the story a bunch so far, and didn't notice any spelling mistakes ;P

hahah that makes me so happy for some reason, I really like Baron and his way of talking, you've done it really well so far

oh ** oh no oh Draco!
please be okay and not horribly dead and well you know all that other bad stuff. great job on the chapter!

hmm I really like the idea behind this, great start, I like the characters so far

may i advise you to read over what you've posted so far again?
there were a few details that didn't make sense at all.

such as a mention of the triwizard tournament in the past while that tournament only happens a few chapters later and a mention of going back to school after a holiday while they all eardy are at school.

and the world cup that's suddenly in the middle of the schoolyear.

but overal it's very good.

i've liked the story pretty much so far,
but the replacing lupin and sirius in this scene with snape and sabian is :(. it's my favorite scene in the entire series, so yeah:/
the lack of lupin and sirius, at all so far, makes me sad:(
but otherwise the story is really good.

Just started reading recently and i am now through chapter ten and i wanted to let you know that i love the idea and i have enjoyed the story so far. i look foward to the rest of the story

super story

update soon

update soon

update soon super chapter

hey I'd just like to say that i thought that this is a great idea, and i loved where you're going with this.

however, i as a person, [nothing on you at all, i can see that there are 48 (positive) reviews for your story], quickly got bored. I thought that this was pretty interesting, but at times i found it kinda hard to keep up with all the old english.

i'm just simply not familiar with some of the words, so i can't fully enjoy, what i'm sure, is a stupendous work of art.

however, i would just like to let you know, that your story really jumped out at me, compared to all of the other stories that i saw on the page. Good job! i consider a lot of the stories on this site to be just a load of crap, so consider yourself one of the good authors.

anyway, keep up the good work! till next time, if there ever is one...

~Beggs

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