roland would be a swordswinger not a gnslinger

I hope this doesn't mean what I think it does.

Interesting concept.

But it'll take time to get used to, afterall, does he swing with his heart like Roland aims with his? Yet, he is still trained as a gunslinger.

Looks forward to seeing a ka-tet. Surely there must be a ka-tet.

And as they say - Thankee-sai. For an intereesting read.

*heads off to read the rest*

By the way, have you read the Little Sisters of Eluria? I hope your swordslinger meets them. And Jenna.

I've only read the first chapter so far, but what I've seen is very good and in keeping with the style and story of the original. The White a part of the Rainbow? Blashpemy! No, its an intriguing idea. Good job with this.

lol, i wanted to read this, but im on book 4 of this series. and i dont wanna ruin it. but these are my favorite books. what little i did read was awesome though. check out my story and write a review.

Always nice to see a well-written fanfic.

Nice curve ball! I wasn't expecting the "Zero" character and was very pleased with the introduction. The Swordslinger is progressing greatly, each chapter going deeper into his world and roots. Keep up the great work I can't wait for the next one!

You're doing a great job capturing the world of the Darktower. The language is spot on.

MISSION EXPOSITION TIME! Cool... so God just runs around in circles... Though I understand the tiniest bit (okay, not really) better when you said I write good Comicality. Are they the good guys? I feel so pathetic... :) Good chapter with the Vampire Zero. He was pretty cool. -LostOzian

Nice way to introduce backstory. So far, he's been very absorbed in what he needs to do, but this is the first time we've seen his feelings. For me, the siren would sing 'Without You' from RENT. One of the saddest songs ever. -LostOzian

Aw, evil Pink. Evil Pink.

I've noticed you've got this unique writing style. It's cool. I met this one kid at camp that used really fluffy poetic language in EVERYTHING he wrote. You're more simple, like you're explaining something to somebody who's rather slow. *like me! :)* It makes for interesting reading. Kudos! -LostOzian

Death, destruction, and free cockroach prostitutes! Such a happy ending! *dies from overuse of sarcasm*

But a beautiful chapter. Hm. I'm not sure I like purple as much as I used to... :) -LostOzian

OZHEAD FREAKOUT DOROTHY GREEN NOT WICKED SQUE!

Sorry. I just had to get that out of my system.

Nice chapter! I'm getting a better understanding of what all the colors mean and what they have power over. Nice chapter! Sorry I didn't find it sooner! -LostOzian

Hile GofG,

You have an excellent imagination and have blended the feel of the Dark Tower series very well. Having the Orbs "bicker" with each other over philosophy was GREAT! The imagery in your tale is vivid and the poster coming to life was a nice touch. You have a fantastic story here and I can't wait to see where you take the Swordslinger next.

Wow, great story! The work you did with the white bullet was excellent. Do you plan to write more about your Swordslinger? I will gladly read it all. You are truly inspired by the Tower.

I'm just reading through the DT books (just started the Wolves) and was very happy to find such a high caliber bit of fan fiction.

Keep up the great work Wordslinger. ;)

No clue what you're talking about, but great writing! Suspenseful story, colors, swords, guns, ghost town, absolutely great! Nice first story, GofG! :) -LostOzian