 RukaStarr 2009-10-30 . chapter 17WOW, I've read Monochrome, and read this one. This story kept me on my toes! I can't wait for the next chapter~! |
 dreaming.sapphire 2009-10-19 . chapter 17:O SHE WINS!? And I've never heard of Violet before. Was he in the game? |
 Razer Athane 2009-10-19 . chapter 17I saw the pic. I totally fangirled. Your cousin beat me to the Monochrome/Never Ever fanart XDXDXDXD
I also remember exchanging amused looks with Hwo when Hikaru walked into the common room, Miharu’s death glare defying us to make any type of comment. - XDXDXDXDXD
Awesome fight scene dude, I'm glad my advice helped :3
“S-sorry about your glasses. I’ll uh... buy you some more...” - XD
I'll reply to your private message tomorrow mkay? I'm not feeling the best atm T_T Great update though :3 |
 ILikeUdon 2009-09-22 . chapter 16Woah this is a good fic... (: I've always loved Xiao Yu, she's my best fighter whenever I play the game, followed closely by Jun. Plus you've written this really well too, it makes the reader curious to find out more. And you should be proud of yourself, too - this fic made me want to start playing tekken all over again. Gah but not until my exams are over, at least(: Hope you update really soon! |
 Razer Athane 2009-07-16 . chapter 16Hell yeah! An UPDATE! I shall reply to your PM after I read this -excited!-
“Yeah, you hit it on that cabinet thing. It was kinda funny until you didn’t get up.” - I freaking love your Hwo man, I know I say this almost every chapter but its so true :3
“That’d have been a bitch to explain. ‘It was self defence officer, I swear! She knew I don’t believe in sex before marriage, but she wouldn’t take no for an answer so I smacked her with a cabinet.’” - OMG WIN XDXDXDXDXD
"Okay, okay, wanna tell me what all that fainting thing was about then? At first I thought it was just a side effect of getting too close to me and my awesomeness, but you should be used to that by now.” - MOAR WIN!
“But I’m prettier than you.”
“My dick’s bigger than yours.” - YOU IS T3H WINRAR! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
“That might have more of an effect if I actually had a dick, Hwoarang.”
“I could make a really easy joke about Kazama right now, but I won’t.” - -shifty eyes-
“It says here that people throw soybeans outside their houses to.. uh... keep demons out. So... we could... uh...” He trails off, scratching the back of his head. “Uh...”
“Throw soybeans at him?” I ask mildly. For a moment, Hwoarang’s expressionless, then he throws down the textbook in a huff. - :3 fufufufufu.
I think I’m starting to piece this together now.
Almost there. - Great way to close the chapter, buddy! Excellent work as always, can't wait to see the next chapter :3
Also, I was looking through my old reviews for this story. Lulz at my first one o.o; |
 Scileney 2009-07-16 . chapter 16Au, I can almost feel the headache.
I really like it so please continue
beggy beggy? *big puppy eyes* |
 Isaac Pwnz You 2009-06-01 . chapter 1I love your writing. ^^ Just finished reading Monochrome in one sitting in the wee hours when I have an A Level exam in the morning. If I fail, I blame you. xD Will be reading this one tomorrow. And yay for Ayu songs as titles! :P |
 SacredOrder 2009-04-24 . chapter 15Yay! The return of one of the greatest stories on this site! I love it! Please continue! It helps to brighten my day just reading your work! |
 starooo 2009-04-20 . chapter 15 OMGOMGOMG.
I'll totally kill you if you don't u
I'll laser you using my toy D. Jin. XD HAHAHA.
OMG.
Update.
This is like the best Tekken Jin romance I had ever read. You are AMAZING. :)
and like really really reallu amazing. I am so drawn into Xiao that I've been using her character (in which I am not barely using) al teh time.
XD
HAHAHAHA. XD AND I SQUEAL EVERYTIME XIAO AND Jin fight.
I - GOD. YOU'RE TEH BEST.
SO, UPDATE. MMKAY? |
 poker face 2009-04-15 . chapter 15 love the story and this chapter! oh please please update soon! :) |
 IrisMidnight 2009-04-14 . chapter 15YAY! an update! yippe! that was awesome! ^_^ cant wait for the next one! |
 fiona91 2009-04-13 . chapter 15i am so happy you continued this story. i love this pairing and the cute flirtations with hwoarang. it was great please continue. |
 Razer Athane 2009-04-13 . chapter 15OH. EM. GEE! AN UPDATE -read-
'For a long time after, I just stay where I am, arms wrapped tightly around Jin, my face buried in his jacket, listening to his quiet, even breathing. The breeze rustles our clothing, carrying with it the faint scent of flowers and the sound of doors occasionally opening and closing far off in the distance.' - Perfect introduction. I love your intro-descriptions. They are the sex :3
'My voice sounds icier than I’d meant it to, and I turn away from him with a twinge of guilt. I want to be understanding, sympathetic, patient. It’s obviously something that’s hard for him to talk about, and I don’t want to sound so angry and frustrated that he can’t share it with me, but I can’t help it.' - Love for this!
“That so? Get your ass over here then, I should definitely have enough energy left to do you for... oh, half an hour.”
“Ha, such a romantic.” I giggle.
“It’d be the best half hour of your life and you know it.” He sits back up, smiling. - -evil grin-
“What, he comes too quick? It happens to the best of us, Xiao, take it as a compliment.”
“What? No! Hwoarang! I didn’t mean...” - -eviller grin-
“Stop being so gross.”
“Stop being so gross!” he imitates in a whiny voice that sounds nothing like me. - -evillest grin-
The end! D: Don't leave us hanging, Batolli! NEW CHAPTER WITHIN A WEEK, KTHNX. XD
Seriously though. Great to see an update :) |
 Jovanna 2009-04-12 . chapter 15YES this update made my day. even though it's another cliffhanger. but i love it. :) |
 DarKxKunoichi 2009-04-12 . chapter 15i'm glad that you've updated! im currently out of english words to say cuz im in the middle of my damn chinese homework. haha... i hope you update again though! |