I love your writing. ^^ Just finished reading Monochrome in one sitting in the wee hours when I have an A Level exam in the morning. If I fail, I blame you. xD Will be reading this one tomorrow. And yay for Ayu songs as titles! :P

Yay! The return of one of the greatest stories on this site! I love it! Please continue! It helps to brighten my day just reading your work!

OMGOMGOMG.
I'll totally kill you if you don't u

I'll laser you using my toy D. Jin. XD HAHAHA.

OMG.
Update.

This is like the best Tekken Jin romance I had ever read. You are AMAZING. :)

and like really really reallu amazing. I am so drawn into Xiao that I've been using her character (in which I am not barely using) al teh time.
XD

HAHAHAHA. XD AND I SQUEAL EVERYTIME XIAO AND Jin fight.

I - GOD. YOU'RE TEH BEST.

SO, UPDATE. MMKAY?

love the story and this chapter! oh please please update soon! :)

YAY! an update! yippe! that was awesome! ^_^ cant wait for the next one!

i am so happy you continued this story. i love this pairing and the cute flirtations with hwoarang. it was great please continue.

OH. EM. GEE! AN UPDATE -read-

'For a long time after, I just stay where I am, arms wrapped tightly around Jin, my face buried in his jacket, listening to his quiet, even breathing. The breeze rustles our clothing, carrying with it the faint scent of flowers and the sound of doors occasionally opening and closing far off in the distance.' - Perfect introduction. I love your intro-descriptions. They are the sex :3

'My voice sounds icier than I’d meant it to, and I turn away from him with a twinge of guilt. I want to be understanding, sympathetic, patient. It’s obviously something that’s hard for him to talk about, and I don’t want to sound so angry and frustrated that he can’t share it with me, but I can’t help it.' - Love for this!

“That so? Get your ass over here then, I should definitely have enough energy left to do you for... oh, half an hour.”

“Ha, such a romantic.” I giggle.

“It’d be the best half hour of your life and you know it.” He sits back up, smiling. - -evil grin-

“What, he comes too quick? It happens to the best of us, Xiao, take it as a compliment.”

“What? No! Hwoarang! I didn’t mean...” - -eviller grin-

“Stop being so gross.”

“Stop being so gross!” he imitates in a whiny voice that sounds nothing like me. - -evillest grin-

The end! D: Don't leave us hanging, Batolli! NEW CHAPTER WITHIN A WEEK, KTHNX. XD

Seriously though. Great to see an update :)

YES this update made my day. even though it's another cliffhanger. but i love it. :)

i'm glad that you've updated! im currently out of english words to say cuz im in the middle of my damn chinese homework. haha... i hope you update again though!

8D Omfg an update!! XD I'm so happy!! Even if it's been 6 months it felt like forever. I love the banter between Hwoarang and Xiao. XD It was so cute! I'd love to see more of that and more Xiao/Jin action. ^_~ Anyways, I'll be waiting for an update! =3 Hopefully it'll be longer next time. :]

please update soon! i love this story and the last one (monochrome). your writing style is awesome! i love jin

ugh... i have a class at 8 tomorrow and its like 2 right now... but reading this story is so worth it. haha. i hope you continue it soon! its been a while since i've read a jin/xiaoyu story and now i think i want to play tekken again.

oh and great story! i cant wait for more!

=]

8D They kissed! Omg, I'm so happy! I'm glad we finally got to the... mending? of the relationship. =] I can't wait to see how you involve Hwaorang in to this. ^^ Update soon!

Wow!! I loved that!! I think the Jin/Xiao thing is what I was looking for hehe

It was strange though. I think the sudden mood change was weird but I'm sure there's a reason behind it. And haha, AGAIN, my unwillingness for Xiao/Hwoarang is killing me :P

But I'm getting over it hahaha

Hey ho. I've pretty much read all your stories before, but didn't have an account so didn't review. I always liked your stories, and this chapter's no exception. I'm no big fan of Xiaoin, but you write it really well. Thumbs up to you.