I'm beginning to think I better check out Ayumi Hamasaki's music. Anyway, this was another good chapter. Kind of short, but I'm really not one to talk. ;)

Omg...

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WOW!

Everyone knows that when a story leaves you speechless, it's pretty damn good.

This is a masterpiece. Simply left me speechless. & the final words: "when I wake up, he won't be there"

NO! It ended! update soon! please ;]

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I loved Monochrome, and this looks good too. I like the way that you write Xiao as a changed person (she'd have to be after everything, wouldn't she?) and I'll be waiting eagerly for an update.

I like your Jin and Xiaoyu stories alot better than your hwoarang ones like the Monochrome I thought that was the bomb but that restless story PISSED ME OFF but forget that I still support your story because you rock!hope you do another Jin and Xiaoyu story soon

Wow, a sequel to Monochrome, eh? I actually thought you would've made one by the way you ended it, and I'm right! I'm so glad that you did, too. Although in Monochrome, I noticed that you did need to do some proof-reading and editing, it was still very well written. The way you described each match was great, I could never do that. (Fights and character meetings were just never my thing.)Maybe I should've left a review for that one? Haha, well I just recently discovered it and seeing that you wrote it so many years ago (okay, maybe not SO many years ago but you know what I mean), I didn't think you would check back on it.

I'm definitely looking forward to this story. I hope Xiaoyu reunites with Jin soon! Hwoarang too, cause I liked his playboy-ish character (; Miharu is such a good friend as well, and I enjoyed reading about her in Monochrome.

Oh, and I just gotta say, I haven't the slightest clue why, but I just felt all squealy and as Xiaoyu would say, "random love-struck teenagery" every time Jin pulled her in close to him. Those scenes were just so...melty? lols. I love it, and I am definitely looking forward to reading some more! Although, they do move quite fast when they just recently got together (right?). Anyway, I think I left you a long enough "review". Sorry for my babbling! Keep up the good writing, though!

Wow- I'm simply in love with your works!

Poignant, interesting, unique- this is an instant favorite.

OMG IM SO GLAD YOU'RE DOING A SEQUAL TO MONOCHROME! i seriously loved that fic, but i kinda hated the ending because it was a bit sad lol. i'm liking this fic so far, please update soon!

I like all of your fanfictions, and I really like the way you write. I honestly can't think of anything you could improve.

Anyway great sequel and I can't wait for the update.

*ticks all 4 boxes in the "Review Story" window*

Yay! Sequel! Squue! ] I can't wait to see more of this, please update!

ah! sorry it took me so long to review. most of the time, the whole chapter wouldn't load and i'd be sad hahaha...but anyways, i like how this is going along with my favortie tekken game so far...they had so much more to xiao and jin then hehehe...anyways, keep it up! i love it!

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You know what? I love you! ...:- Not in that type of way. I haven't been to this part of since all the greats have disappeared. When I DID I came upon the sequal to Monochrome! I swear I about to cry.

When I read it I felt sorry for Xiao. Being stuck on two guys that mean alot to her, feeling sorta depressed and having "dreams" of Jun, thinking she went crazy. I love it...again!

Now I was disappointed that I didn't get to finish "Restless" but I will! Oh yeah, one last thing. Since you're a noticable Ayumi-san fan you think you can put in one of her new songs from "Secret" called 'Jewel'? I love that song and music video.

P.S. I would love to complement you and say (in my opinion)that you and Melancholy Doll were the greatest Xiao/Jin or Hwoarang fiction writers ever to grace the Tekken fics. I mean it from the heart ;P

Ja Ne..

Nice bit in italics at the end...very poetic/philosificish...overall nice work.

Wow, flashback to Tekken 4! XD Anyhoo, I loved this chapter, and I'm quite excited and I'm kinda stoked for the third chapter. Hope Jin will appear on that one!