all i can say WOW...this story is amazing, really amazing, i really loved that episode and i'm really happy you carried on with their story in the 1940's. Please update soon, i don't i can wait to long!!

Love it I hope you update soon

Oh what can the surprise possibly be? We will just have to wait and find out. Can't wait to see what it is. Keep up the great work.

Oh la la... update!

Hmm I wonder what this surprise could be. Well something to ponder as I wait for the next chapter of this story, which is going very well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Lovely cliff hanger. Anyway no problems that I could see here. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter from you. Keep up the great work.

I never thought that the General could do that... He is such a caring parent:P:D Hilarious:P

OH boy shotgun wedding. Anyway seems like another great chapter. keep up the great work. No problems that I could see.

Interesting turn of events...I'll stay tuned.

Oh my God Lois's dad as just listening to that the whole time!? now that is a reason to die right then and there.

Oh snap! Well another great chapter no problems that I could see. Poor Clark meeting the General in those circumstances. Keep up the great work. can't wait for the next chapter.

Well another great chapter. No problems here that I could see. Keep up the great work and can't wait for the next chapter.

This is great! I can't wait for what comes next! It is so interesting! Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!

I love the story so far and I was laughing the whole time when Lois and Clark were in Oliver's mansion I especially like Oliver's reaction to Lois's kiss and quick departure UPDATE!

Well another great chapter. well I guess that is one way to distract a person. haha. Anyway no problems that I could see. Can't wait for your next chapter. keep up the great work.