A very well told story. What else can i say? Well done! Thanks for sharing it with us, cause itsa compelling fic.

A wonderful fic. So beautifully written, and such accurate portrayal of Raziel. It is amazing how you have managed to penetrate his thoughts and fancies of flight - and then convey his unbearable pain in the depths of the Abyss. The first time I read this at Nosgoth.net, it nearly made me gasp in wonder. Good job, FireC. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic story..very easy to visualise...oooh the fun I could have drawing scenes from this story..hang on! :D

*cry* I love this story. It's so vivid; it puts a face on the Razielim, and indeed, the other vampires as well. Excellent.

This is a terrific story! You seem to know how to dive into the mind of Raziel really well. :) I like a lot.

Duuuude... Wow, man. Just wow

Still a great story, and still one of my favorites! I really love the description of Raziel as he's flying for the first time - you do a good job of describing his sense of absolute bliss. Very nice. :)

THERE IT IS ! This is a good story but I personally think it shouldnt be added to. Even though everyone knows what will happen, adding to this story would just rob the suspense from it.

To Fortywinks: Sorry... that was all I did with LoK for the time being. Thanks so much for the favorable review though.

Wow this is really cool. Is there going to be any more? I'd be interested to read more if there is, you write in a way which makes me want to read more even though I know what's going to happen!LOL

WOW! It kicked ass! It was great! Keep writing!

Yeah! You finally got it up at FF.Net FireC! And the fic is still as good as I remember it. _-

I remember this one from the realm. But not being a member I couldnt review it until now. This is a very good story I rank it right up there at the top along with Arafels broken wings and little brother stories. I see you decided to leave out

painful, agonizing death part this time, eh?