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| EmSyd 2008-06-24 ch 19,  | abuseFantastic. Intriging and a very addictive read. |
| Aphina 2007-10-09 ch 19, | abuseI'd already read the most of this at some point before so I thought I'd just post a review at the end. I love her background. The ending was really sweet. I love the whole issue with politics. The way the team rallied around ehr was spot on. |
| Madison Bellows 2007-08-28 ch 19, | abuseThe end? Ack, THE END? Well I am glad you have a sequel (but wasn't this a sequel?) planned. Loved the last couple of chapters they were full of everything you could want and then more! Once again a very readable story with believable OC's. Rock on! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-08-28 ch 19, | abuseloved it! can't wait for the sequel! |
| brainDamage089 2007-08-28 ch 19, | abuseAH! OMG! I! LOVED! IT! OMG! that was FANTASTIC! OMG THATS EVEN BETTER THAN I HAD PICTURED OMG! i think all those parts where he either growled in her ear or when he pulled her close i got chills MUWHAHAHA! LMAO i love it! o gosh i cant believe its the end lmao but it was A VERY GOOD ENDING! ^.^ YAY! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-08-27 ch 18, | abuseomg! i loved this chapter! great job! |
| JSgal24JAG 2007-08-27 ch 18, | abusetoday would be lovely on that last chapter. I love it! Thank goodness someone got Gerrard's head on straight now. |
| brainDamage089 2007-08-27 ch 18, | abuseSON! NOW NOW NOW! lmao LOVE THE ACTION! and please let everything end up alright! lmao can't wait to hear the ending! LOVE IT!! UPDATE SOON! |
| brainDamage089 2007-08-24 ch 17, | abuseMUWAHAHA! CLASSIC CSI NY! EVERYTHINGS CONNECTED! lmao i loved this but DAMN THOSE CLIFFHANGERS! haha can't wait to hear more! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-08-24 ch 17, | abuseawesome chapter! i can't wait for the next ones! ^_^ |
| Aphina 2007-08-24 ch 17, | abuseHey. thi s was a really fab feqw chapters. i really loved the way everything unfolded. I love the way Mac challenged Gerrard the bastard deserved it. |
| Aphina 2007-08-24 ch 6, | abuseGAh! loved seeing ehr kick **, poor Wayne! lol i did laugh. Great cliff hanger. |
| Aphina 2007-08-24 ch 5, | abuselol I'm on edge too no, the perfume was a nice idea! |
| Aphina 2007-08-24 ch 4, | abuseGood answer, I'm liking the way Don was so supportive, you made it totally believable. |
| Aphina 2007-08-24 ch 3, | abuseMy curiosisity is well and truley peaked. I love Laura, and am intergued about whats going on. You make your charachter very likeable. |