Aw! D:

That was cute, but kind of sad. Interesting how you had her try to maintain a one-dimensional personality so that Florian wouldn't be able to guess what she was really thinking. Nice job handling Florian's whole "innocent one" angle, too. Very in-character! :D

I've been looking for something like that FOREVER. Thank you.

I always try to leave constructive criticism, but I can't really say anything there. Nicely written, in character, a nice read.

How come there aren't any reviews? It certainly deserves quite a few of them.