I didn't understand snif snif snif...
The ending, the diary caught atention from Guy? Guy was spendind all that time away from because he was reading the note? Ahm?
I'm dumb, sorry
But, besides that tiny detail, I understand the most part so I can say that ur fic is awesome, I luv it >.<

ja ne

Oh my! That was quite...steamy. D:
But that's good! I wished you would've warned me...I've been reading so much cute GuyLuke fics this one just came out of no where! xD;;
Ah, I thought Luke was a bit OOC. I mean, if it had been long-haired!Luke, I would've understood. I mean, shorthaired!Luke calls Mieu...well, Mieu, and treats him more kindly. And acts bratty, but to an extent.
And the ice part confused the heck out of me. Unless it was something else... >_>;;
Other than that, as a smut fic, it was good! I sure blushed madly. x3
-Apple Fairy

That was absolutely HOT. I really enjoyed reading this! ^_^

aws, that was so cute! But I don't really understand the reason why he used ice...? *confused* But it was cute and...it was a nice idea Luke...good one! I love you Guy!

LOL. Poor Guy. xD But he had fun, didn't he?

*drools* Oh wow..that was soo awesome!!

X3 Kyaah~~ That was cute and awesome at the same time. Keep it up!!