This story will someday have an end?
I know its kind of weird said this, because a story give a lt of work...but the last update was last YEAR...sorry. I just like the story and i would like to see how it will end...

yes, was a long chapter..but! was a good one!

God chap...

i start to get in the story.. thaks god i did not deleted this...

oh, haha, didn't notice the arrow button going to the next chapter... now i feel dumb. well, glad you did continue it back when then... if that made sense...

anyway, good chapter

NO, DON'T TAKE IT DOWN! I LOVE THIS SO FAR!

It's really good, and I would like to read it until the end. Your idea is amazing, and your writing is great! I want to still read it, so PLEASE DON'T TAKE IT DOWN! Please finish it as well. It is really good.

what oh no ~ please keep writting ! i love your story T-T lol i really want to know whats going to happen when sasuke finds out about sakuras past ! lol you write really well .. please update .. please >_< thank you ~!!

Well happy birthday! Another fine chapter. A suggestion that I would make is that it seemed a like you kind of jumped into the different characters without any warning. A little space or a line to separate the points of view might help. But that's just technical stuff.

You know, I know that you're a Shikamaru/Temari fan, but I'm kind of leaning more towards Shika/Ino. And that part of me hopes that they go through with the wedding. Gah! Don't hate me!! Haha.

Joe Asha'man

Ah, that was were I'd last left, ne? ^^"

Yay for the long chapter! And yay for the appearance of many characters! I couldn't imagine how irritating Kankuro could be, even more so to his older sister. So, the weddings are close *-* Can't wait to read on~

-pokes fingers together- Thank you for the mention.

-chuckles- Sakura using minor insults to tell Sasuke of her feelings was amusing. I particularly enjoyed the 'blockhead' comment.

I wasn't that surprised with the revealing of some identities, but it was nice to have a confirmation, all the same. And by the mentioning of her, I'm assuming that Tenten will be coming back into the story soon?

-chuckles- Shikamaru's an open book. At least to Asuma, he is. Though, I have to sympathize for him; he's not exactly under happy circumstances.

There were several errors (grammar mistakes, misuses) throughout this, but they can be fixed just looking over the content in the chapter.

And happy birthday, Kanashimi Angel.

great chap!! omg kankuro is such a butt! i cant wait for update!! is gaara going to send guys to stop the wedding and help temari out?? will she tell shika?? i dont know and dont want to know until you update :)! love your fic!! have a great hump day (wednesday...if u didnt know)

Whew! Got it read, and I'm glad I did. It may have been a while since you last updated, but you haven't missed a step. As good as ever. Keep up the good work!

Joe Asha'man

very cool idea :-) cant wait to read more. update soon!

-pats shoulder- Don't worry. The wait is understandable. I do that quite often myself, even if it is for shorter periods of time. And I'm sorry this review is late. My computer just picked a wonderful time to start breaking down, and I couldn't get Internet access until the night, say around midnight, so I had to get to bed. Ignoring that...
I'm not quite sure of what to say about what the description of what I feel towards this chapter is; I know it's a myriad of things. Slight euphoria, bundles of shock, traces of apprehension, and perhaps numbness...? I don't quite know where the numbness came from, but I'm pretty sure I know where the shock came from. For one, the first shock was probably the ShinoHana. I'm sorry, I'm just a crazy ItachiHana fan (even if Kishimoto says that Itachi had a lover that was probably a distant cousin since he killed the person), so I tend to have a bit of a hard time accepting some pairings. It's only a minor issue, so I'll deal with it. Oh, and the father-son talk Shino had...one really wouldn't expect that. -snorts- The line where you said that Shibi was relieved that he and Shino were finally having the talk was certainly amusing. The slight euphoria probably came from when you brought Tenten back into the story. Another source of shock and this time apprehension as well was Temari's pregnancy. Shock, well, you probably already know the reason for the shock; the apprehension is kind of obvious as well, I guess. Having a woman who is pregnant with multiple fetuses going into dangerous territory...isn't that a bundle of joy. The numbness, or perhaps just something I don't know how to put words to is probably the further information on the strange names that have been popping up in the story lately. And I'm curious about Leader. -shrugs- And that's pretty much all I can get out right now, though I'll probably think of something else after I submit the review. You did a nice job though; again, don't worry about the wait.
And question. Are you going to update before, during, or after the time period from June 29 to July 18? Because I'll be without computer access for those three weeks. T_T
And there were some grammar scruffs in this but nothing that can't be easily fixed. Forgive me if I sould biased due the probably abundance of errors in this review.

epitelous! einai polu megalo chapter!
oraio, o Gaara m'aresei polu edo kai oi skhnes me thn Temari kai ton Eiji einai polu oraies!
Kai epitelous mpainoume sto psito!HAHA!