 H1d4n 2009-10-18 . chapter 17 LOL! GAARA'S GHOST ROOM'S BABY GHOST! that was so funny! and Gaara vs. Kankuro poke'mon style was hillarious! |
 Gaara-frenzy 2009-10-16 . chapter 17yay baby gaara is adorible. and evil hehehehe. poor hinata. awesome chapter, i hope you update soon!! XD |
 YoshimiCookieMountain 2009-08-27 . chapter 1gr please update soon you havent updated since 2008, its 2009 now please im itching to read the next chapter...*puppy eyes* |
 GioCentric 2009-01-31 . chapter 16Ah! Must read more |
 pink phoenixs 2009-01-28 . chapter 16Gah! No! That computer thing was the saddest part of the entire story T^T
Baby Gaara may be cute, but I hope Hinata doesn't have to wait over a decade to get him back to normal
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Psst! Update soon please!
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 Emirii 2009-01-22 . chapter 16 You can't just end it there!! D: As an Epic gaahina fangirl, i screamed in rage when it ended, and i cried when gaara died...GAARA NEEDS TO LIVE AND AND T~T I think i'm too emotional atm! Good writing, btw. I'm reading gaahina fanfics to get a feel of what's been done and how i can write my own better, so thank you. :3 You have a pretty good writing style, though, i reccomend using more details etc. make it alot chunkier..lasts longer and people won't scream in fangirl rage when it ends. xD |
 Tomoyo7 2008-11-25 . chapter 1nice story...keep it up!
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 frubiafan 2008-11-17 . chapter 1wasn't this on deviantart? It was really good! |
 cobra-2k 2008-11-16 . chapter 16I like the idea. Really, I do. But this story is not well-written. Grammatical errors throughout make it very difficult to comprehend what's going on and who's saying what. There's a lot of tense-changing, even within sentences. By the end of the first paragraph of the first chapter, I was already confused by descriptions of Hinata as timid and stuttering, yet happy-go-lucky. Like I said, I like the idea. I think if you had a competent beta reader, this story could be polished to the point where it would be far more accessible. |
 Kira Acumichi 2008-11-12 . chapter 16oh magical i luv it |
 Gaara-frenzy 2008-11-11 . chapter 16haha evil little gaara!! i didn't see that coming, well i did think he was coming back but not as a baby. cool chapter!! i hope you update soon!! XD |
 Gaara-frenzy 2008-10-20 . chapter 15no gaara can't die! evil cliff hangers!! raccoons smight thee!! i hope you update soon!! XD |
 airee-aria 2008-10-13 . chapter 15is gaara really die?? I hope it's an happy ending. luv this ff ^-^ |
 Kira Acumichi 2008-10-10 . chapter 15NNO! he cant die-crie- |
 Kira Acumichi 2008-09-23 . chapter 14i love this story update soon |