 Night Xiniall 2008-09-07 . chapter 10Gah! -dies-
Must know what happens..! o-e
-NX. |
 DorkFace 2008-04-27 . chapter 10Ooer.
Me thinks this is the best prequel ever.
Usualy Prequels and Sequals Are (to phrase this rightly)
Crap.
But this is good..
I Wanna Know whats happens!
EEK!
xx |
 Kiki Lelsissia 2007-11-26 . chapter 10You did a prequel! YAY! Oh my gosh, yay! A prequel! And a sequel! YAY! Please update again soon, this is really really awesome. I have faith in you.
-Kiki |
 LFO 2007-09-23 . chapter 10Hm...I didn't review this chapter yet? Weird...This story is short, but I liked it, and you should really update it. Just like you should update all of your other stories. You /are/ going to update them...right? Pwease? :3 |
 i luv Zexion but he luvs Demyx 2007-08-03 . chapter 10 NOO! you cant leave it there i wont let you well i cant really stop you tho damn
cant wait for next chappy
~frogfly~ |
 atrocitous 2007-08-03 . chapter 10Yo~
So, I absolutely loved the Holy Smirk, and when I found out you had a prequel, I was estatic! Your writing is top-notch and you keep everyone in character so well! I love your depiction of the relationship between Axel and Roxas, especially how it all started off. You are an awesome writer!! Keep going!! |
 LfJp 2007-08-02 . chapter 10-falls over- You ... you can't end it like that! -whimper- Please, please, please update soon! Cookie for you if you do!
-LfJp |
 LfJp 2007-08-02 . chapter 9Lol, Axel's a sneaky one! Thanks for updating, I love your stories!
-LfJp |
 synnesai 2007-08-02 . chapter 10ack...what gonna happen? gonna kick some butt!!?? xD
These darn cliff hangers =] x3 wonder what's gonna happen next =3 |
 synnesai 2007-08-02 . chapter 9oh joyous! I was wondering where you disappeared too! SO good to see an update deary! =] LOL~ Axel axel axel...tricking poor roxas like that xD atta boy! xD
BTW - I finished painting you cover - but...I don't have a scanner so...I swear I'll get it to you ASAP >.> so sorry! |
 der kleine fuchs 2007-08-02 . chapter 10I'm glad to see another part of this out~ ^_^ Good as always. |
 V- 2007-06-29 . chapter 8 Love it. |
 LFO 2007-06-23 . chapter 8Wow. Not to be rude or anything, but how long has it been that I've been gone (still am; by the way, I updated my story up to the fifth chapter, and you still haven't reviewed much of it! If it's about the religious bashing thing, I'm sorry; I didn't think about putting up a warning since I'm atheist, and all)? You've only updated two stories in practically fifteen days (I think)! Not saying that it wasn't good, or anything. I'm looking forward to how this is gonna turn out; your story has a lot of potential for a lot more AkuRoku and Zemyx then The Holy Smirk did. Good luck with your writing, and have a good summer! |
 square from space 2007-06-23 . chapter 8XD A PUPPY
it's cute that axel went to all that trouble to help a pup
update soon! |
 LfJp 2007-06-22 . chapter 8YAY! Thanx for updating. As always, great chapter and Axal and Roxas are SO CUTE! Axel's big heart for puppies. They're gonna ghet in so much trouble... :D
Can't wait for the next one! But luckily I also have the first chap of the sequal to The Holy Smirk!
-LfJp |