OMG! You know I read this whole story was too captivated to review. At the end I thought I knew how it was gonna work out. I almost closed out and said 'another fairy tale ending no need to read on no matter how good this author is' but then i read the last line in chapter eleven and now I am literally begging you to UPDATE SOON SOON SOON!

awesome the underworld COOL! thanks for the update i love it keep it up!

I love your story, Its great! I cant wait to read more! Update soon!

(Not logged in, oops) SO GOD.

i think you might have put the same chapter as 10 in this one. because i read this and seemed very familiar so i went back to 10 and there it was again. thought you should know

I think I read this chapter already. That's weird. Because I haven't.
... whoa.

Anyway XD. Great chapter!!

OMG! she cant die NNO thats not cool! ah! wow very intense ending there,good writing! poor ofelia! no! please keep it up im on the edge of my seat!!

wo i luv it! i dont care what pov u use just please keep writing i luv ur stories!!so dont leave me hanging for long!!

i loved them both and nice twist i can't remember does she have a piece of eight because if she does wouldn't someone eventually go after her if they ever want to lock Calypso in her mortal body again.

I love the girl names she called him. ... wait, she killed herself?! Wow, man!

Haha I love Jack -steals Jack-

loved it

This was a good chapter!!

Yay! another excellant chp!!the little romance part was very touching and sad!:( and the diff langue was a nice touch even though i didnt understand a word! but it doesnt matter cuz the story is 2 good! i think ur right bout the jack thing but other than that its wonderful! even the stupid e-bay pop-ups couldnt ruin it!(i HATE those at first i didnt kno u could just skip it and next thing i kno i had a e-bay account!!) but anyways please write more on the edge of my seat!!

i really loved it

So, did Villanueva try to have her killed or something so that he could become a pirate lord of her family? After all, he killer Giuseppe (I'm assuming). This is a great story! Sorry I haven't reviewed at all! I really do love it!