You do great advice, but you really need to work on your writing. Spelling and Grammar can be corrected by the Fanfiction . net word processor (use it after you upload documents to the site to avoid any flames or whatever.)

Okkay, so Will is a traitor. Unexpected twist. Sorry, I took so long to review.

uhoh not very good, poor will

post soon plz

Nah, it's alright you have writer's block, at least we know you're out there! :) Please try to get over it, I can't wait to see what's coming up next for Sam and her friends!

I was half way through the chapter and wanted to say Borcht say will like vill.

-Toddles

FINALLY! I got ON! *does a little dance for joy* Great chappie! Write more soon!

Aww, poor rats, suddenly I pity them. And Sam's dream was so scary! Wow, you really do write those well, I envy you! But what does it mean? Sorry, I'm kinda sick so I can't think as clearly as normal. :P But you do know that I think you're an amazing author and you totally need to update soon please oh please oh please!

? this is odd...i'll keep reading now.

wonder who the traitor is

post asap plz

I wanna find out, I wanna find out! It's like you're asking me to beg for a review! Which I will now do. Oh man oh man oh man that was so awesome and I don't think I mentioned this but Sam and the Voice's conversations are so funny and I do like Will could I see more of him and Maddy and Zack are fun (because talkative people are fun when they're not talking to you) and Lilly is so cute and I miss Corin and I always love to read about them but I can't unless you update, please please PLEASE!

O, mystery, *yawn* so sleeppy. not that its your story...zsnorezsnorez(I really don't snore.)

nice chappie

update soon plz

You are soo...(urg!) You're still coming of way to strong. Whats a sorry with a but behind it?

Hey! I LOVE your story! Can you put the link to the blog (if there is one) in your story? Coz I wanna read it!

You're a brilliant authoress (ess, right?) and I can't wait for the next chappie" xx

I'm not offended and I'm not going to give you crap about religion. Yes, I think you knew that, but I figured I may as well let you know again. Please update soon, I really can't wait to see if they find the Flock or not!