actually, most religous stories are just that, stories. they're actually real events that people have exaggerated to make other people believe that a miracle has happened eg. the Noah's flood probably started as a actual flood, but in a small area ,then it was adapted to show people what would happen if you obey god and what happens if you don't. but that's most, and it's just an example

CORIN! You schmuck, don't leave your flock, your parents would kill you if you became a traitor! Or are you leaving to get help? I mean this is your sister and your cousins and your friends after all. But are you? And now to stop talking to Corin...GOD'S SERVANT! No fair, giving us a cliffie, that's just mean! Please oh please oh please update soon, I NEED to see what the heck Corin's doing climbing out the dang window in the middle of an Eraser fight! Pretty please will you update soon? (*bambi eyes*)

Hey, you know even though you still have spell check you should go over it again, I still see a lot of mistakes, but thats okay. And :P miss high abd mighty, I'm sure other people were confused with Saxim's voice. I'm your friend so I can tell you that! So once again :P! (:D)

Wow this was awesome! I really don't like Corin, but i think i'm always going to side with Sam :P. Please do more soon! Please do more soon! Please! I'm not just saying this, i really really want you to do more! When ever this story comes up i always drop everything else that i'm doing to read it! I love it! Please hurry with the next chapter! Please!

KeL xx

nice chappie

post again soon

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Besides the fight that was so funny! My favorite part was where Sam said "Zach, you do know most people will think you're a terrorist, right?" that was so hilarious I wish I could use that in my story! You are so brilliant you know that right and I love the rambling you did with Zack and Maddy and the fight was perfect even though it was a freaking FIGHT no one likes those everyone gets hurt but it was a nice touch how you made everyone go to McDonalds while the fight was going on that was so funny and lightened the mood loads that was a great touch and (*musical tone*) I love rambling how 'bout you, it's so fun, d'ya like it too? In summary, great chapter, I'm an insane rambler, and please update before I go on that killing spree I promised in my review for First Kiss!

ZOMG! I was only going to like read 1 chapter and then after like a paragraph I was hooked and I totally abandoned my friends on Gaia! It's like you have some mind control! CRAZY!

O.o

But yeah it was great. Corin sounds so hot! heheheehe

You need to do something about the voice. Its hard to figure out who's talking Sam or her voice? And don't explain to me the quation marks and how the ones in quotations are Sam and the other ones the voice, its still confusing.

Oh my gosh YES! Another chapter! It wont take that long for another one will it? I hope not, this story is wonderful! I love it to bits! Please do more real soon! Please!

KeL xx

(*gasp*) why would she rather be unconscious? I NEED to know! Great chappie, I think Zack is really funny, kinda like Iggy, but how could he be if he was Nudge's son? Maybe Iggy snuck over to see Nudge and GASP naughty naughty! I am SO weird. But that's what happens when I read an amazing story, I get hyped up because it's so well written and I can't wait to read another chapter of it but I can't because you haven't updated it but please update soon so then I can read it and send you more crazy reviews because they're so much fun to send and spread craziness all over the world and laugh at all the crazy people which would kinda include me because I'm crazy and please update soon I'm so crazy I know it but I'm a constant reviewer so why should you care if I'm crazy I think crazy is kinda funny how about you do you like crazy I like it since people are all funny when they're crazy and they do insane stuff and-

Iggy: uh, roughdiamond5?

Me: huh?

Iggy: why are you acting like Nudge?

Me: uh...I am Nudge?

Nudge: nuh uh, I'm over here!

Me: no you're not! (*drops smoke bomb and runs away dragging Iggy behind me*)

Iggy: why are you taking me?

Me: I think Evil Angel of DOOM wants to meet you.

Iggy: NO! And roughdiamond5 says please update soon.

awsome chappies

update soon

Evil school! And no I don't mean thee School I mean school in general! :P

Update or ELSE!

BYE!

Y does it say there is thiteen chapters but there is only 12?

BYE!

YAY! I love it when you update your stories, they're so fullfilling, like when I read the actual Maximum Ride books! I think that this could actually happen and JP should take your ideas and you should get half the money he makes because these are so smart and well-thought out! It's too bad school's starting soon for the both of us. But please update when you can!