This story has only one word to describe it: ROCKS, it rocks, I just love it, you really need to update, I'm sitting on tenderhooks here waiting for you to continue!
CrazyNutSquirrel 7/28/08 . chapter 8
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I love this story very much and I'm very impatient for more, you were inspired when you wrote this! I don't care if Sonic and Shadow or any Sonic characters are in there, I love this because of the originality and the inspiration you use when you write this, it is truly a work of art and I really hope you update soon as I stated at the top of this review, oh darn it! I can't even find the correct words to express how much I like it! One more time, I plea, WRITE MORE!
This story is actually really cool. I read it all in one sitting, nad I love it! Rozik is so cool; I liked him in Chaotic Power too, I know that isn't your story though. Update this story soon, it shouldn't go unfinished!
Amazing, as usual. Man, alot has happened here, Brom dies, but not really, all the others almost die, Rozik and Seema have a nice little talk (aw...), Gary and Orea have a nice little talk (I'm starting to think of them as a couple), Darem and l have a not so nice little talk, and Gary uses Chaos Control. I'm sort of surprised that Maelstrom crystals use Chaos abilities, though I'm guessing they also have their own unique ones. As usual, Suzy's a cutie (I love how she sees them all as family, I know I would), and I have to say that Gary's reserved personality is surprising, and I'm wondering just how those crystals are affecting him.
Whoa, there is so much action in this chapter, things are really starting to get exciting! God, Gary got strong; those stones seem to me to be even more powerful than just Chaos Emeralds, but they also have drawbacks, which makes them much more appealing (as do the names). And Chaos Control made it into the story, yeah! Gary beat Al pretty quickly, though I get the feeling that ther are going to be some side affects (if not from the stone, then from the fights).
And poor Rozzy, being forced to get near the flames when he's pyrophobic... if only Gary weren't so persistent!
I totally can't wait for the next chapter, this is insanely good!
Anyway...; I thought you did a marvelous job on this one. And what's more, Gary's finally using his powers, Al’catraz was fighting with Brom, and Kecht is after Sema. Oh! And not to mention you left as off with the idea that if they didn't get their arses out of there, they'll all die.o.o This is gotta be the best part ever.*w00t* Keep up the good work Ciel, cause your on a roll.xD
First off, whoa, Voracity's Bloodstone is the coolest gem-name I've ever heard in my life!
Hem, now that that's out of the way, whoa! (again!) That gem must be super powerful, to make even Al'catraz go crazy with power. I just hope someone can help her get over this, before bad things start happening (not that they haven't already, what with those guys all being wanted).
And why do I get the feeling that Rozie is pyrophobic?
Whoa, Suzy is one killer 6 year old. It's so hard to believe that she could be such a killing machine and still so innocent, I love her so much, but it's like, wow. I really like this chapter, especially cuz we see Rozik's soft side. And Gary's right, Turquiose Lightening is a pretty name!
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