nice

You've handled a lot of issues far better than any of the movies have. But then, I expect that from your stories.

its cool.

i saw pirates 3 just the other night and am now desperate for good post-3 fic. yours is the first i've found. awsome, keep it up!

very very good vision of the future for the characters in Pirates of the Caribbean. too bad this story made more sense than the actual movie.

very bittersweet tone throughout. jack's portrayal was very well done.

i liked the son the most and the way you handled her waring with herself about drinking the Water or not. that was a huge highlight

great read. awesome job!

sweet plz update!

oh man
i mean, when i go through i don't really actually expect to find anything good, because so much of it is mary-sue or just plain crap.
this... this is wonderful. seriously. i noticed the three visits later problem when i was sitting in the movie theatre, and i've been drooling for fic ever since... you've answered that wonderfully. thank you.

Wow! What a wonderfully long chapter!

I hope Bill, Lizzy, Jack, and Will can have a moment together, seeing as they are as much family as anything else, despite all the thoughts of one bashing a bottle of rum over the others head lol.

Please update soon!

Lovely, and very well written!