it's good :) i guess you're probably holding off on a lot of things you want to write about, but i'm happy reading it! besides, a lot of stuff happened in this chapter. x_x; jyoumi?? i thought this was mimato? :P mimi never gives yamato a chance, haha. please continue!

Cute as always. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I've got here some questions to give you. 1. What is this fanfic about? 2. Where or when does it take place? 3. What are the ages of the individuals in this fanfic? 4. What was going on when this fanfic started? 5. It started in the Digital World, right? 6. Where in the Digital World did it open up at? Be specific. 7. The individual asking for everyone was Mimi, right? Be sure to let me know. If you want, you can choose which questions you want to answer. The remaining ones can be answered within this fanfic.

Hi there!!
You know, I'd really apreciate if you put trasnlations next to the japanese word (in context). It's a bit frustrating having to scroll down every time a japanese word comes!
And that's all what I can say for now x)
Keep it up!!

I'll answer your questions ;)
1.- Yes, you should make them shorter perhaps put a limit on what you write. 20 words?, 30 words? would be just enough.
2.- For me, it's too slow. Sorry for what I'm going to say but you take too much time in writing things with the other character when all what we want is the Mimato thingy. We want action!
3.-You SHOULD most definitely make it faster. There are some things we really don't care if they happen... a lot of small things that you go far beyond describing. It isn't really a need for those scenes.
This is my opinion and I'm no demanding reader. Just hope you give then a thought. Maybe two XD Best luck.
Pinky

i love it! please continue

I liked it so far. Please continue :p

Good :) I like this story. Can I get a little more? :D

good work, keep it up!

i hope this turns out to be mimato! please continue!

cute :) More please?

i'm in love with this fic! please continue!

please continue it! this story feel so anime! or manga-ish!

great JOB!

I would say "continue please!"

^_^

~*~M & M Forever~*~

There was no reason to assume the blond was Yamato; there's no hints of romance between Yamato and Mimi in the actual anime series, after all. There's more hints between Takeru and Mimi than the former... which is why I was kind of surprised to realize I'd never actually read a Takemi before. People always cling to the unreasonable (not impossible, but then again nothing's impossible) pairing of Yamato and Mimi. Doesn't make sense, if you ask me. o_O Then again, I just don't like Mimi, so...