OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. Okay, so, yes, I am really, really, REALLY happy that Lucas was there to save her. But I am SO SAD that he wasn't there on time! She was actually raped...oh, poor Brookie. She really does not need this. He should call the police anyway. or at least beat the bastard in with his shoe. Oh man...:( This is a fantastic story! I almost don't want to read the next chapter, cause it'll be the last one before I have to wait...I hate waiting. lol

Dude...I wanted her to read the letter! Make her read the letter! lol I love where this story is going. You're taking things slow, which is--frustrating--but also appreciated. I love slow build up in stories. It's why I adore BL so much. And I do feel sorry for Oliver. I loved how he still kept some things the same: knowing her drink, refusing her money, etc. It was sad.

I wish Brooke had answered Haley's calls.

Dude that was SUCH A depressing chapter! I...I miss Oliver already! I definitely did NOT want him and Brooke to be a couple. They just seemed...far too friend's only to me. But now that's over, and I'm sad for Brooke. And oh GAWD. My jaw LITERALLY dropped when we found out that Brooke "knew" Nathan. That was just...totally unexpected. And it sucks for my Naley and Baley shipping heart. Poor Haley.

The Brucas, as always, was the greatest thing in the chapter. I just love how he kept on staring at her, not caring who was watching or how obvious it was. And the last part tugged at my heart. Love them.

Awe, Oliver loves her! YAY! Everyone loves Brooke! I must say, I am so fricken ecstatic that you brought on Haley! Baley is like, the best thing since sliced bread (and Brucas) and I was just so happy that they're already friends.

But Brooke, Brooke Brooke...what in the hell is she thinking? She's going to go to the biggest party of the year, where she was finally going to get with Lucas, and she brings along a date? Tsk. Tsk. I have a feeling that her comment in the last chapter "the taste is worth the mess" meant a lot more to Lucas than cotton candy...

:D:D:D:D HEE!! I love love love that he called her Brooke at the end. And that conversation between her and Lily was the cutest thing I ever did read. Loved the way you tied in Brooke to the locked in Polar Bear. I wonder why Peyton doesn't seem to care if Lucas found out...maybe she's just like, a super duper amazing manipulator and knows that Brooke won't say anything? hmm...

So, I'm absolutely loving all your new original characters. Oliver seems like SUCH a sweetheart. I want more of him. Had to get that out of the way.

Now, I so completely did not see that coming! Peyton is cheating on Lucas?! Whoa...for some reason, I actually liked their tiny bit of interaction last chapter, and now you have her cheating on him! For four years! Poor Luke!

But yay for BL! I really can't wait for them to get together.

I do have to say though, your last sentence was amazing. Very well written.

Wow. Even poor, Dan is truly filth. I always thought it was his money that made him so arrogant. But it's interesting that you changed the fact that he was rich, made for a good twist. I already love the BrookeLucas interaction, even if it was little. I love the Rodger guy. He's such a sweet heart.

The explanation of how Brooke got to where she is was so depressing. The fact that she believes she's only worth the diamonds she owns...that's just no way to live. And her parents completely abandoning her is heart breaking. Can't wait to see Lucas show her how worthy she really is. <3

Dammit. Leyton are together. Ugh. Well...I know it wont be for long, cause, BL rock. But i'm so excited about this story! I love the idea of the storyline and your writing is wonderful! *reads the next chapter*

So happy you updated! I really liked the Brucas interaction.

Continue!=]

Great Update, I feel so bad for brooke but I'm really glad lucas is there for her. Its really sad that she doesn't believe she deserves love from lucas but hopefully she'll get over it and follow her heart. I can't wait to read more, and atleast brooke is let him in a little at the end there. UD when you can:)

Lucas is such a doll! Can't wait to see them grow closer! Thanks for the ud! xoxo

great chapter!
im so glad that lucas is there for brooke, and more than that, that brooke is letting him do all this.
i cant wait to read more.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

great chapter
update soon

Well, I don't really know how to word this but you Brooke being a prostitute sound elegant and that's really good writing. In exchange for diamonds instead of money. So good. I love it. Hope you update soon.