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Quite interesting... Quite interesting indeed. Xiao seems rather vicious, which is a good thing considering what Dynasty Warriors did to her.

Speaking of which, though I detest those games in general, Dynasty Warriors is where Romance of the 3 Kingdoms fans have gathered now. If you'd like to get more hits or reviews for your works related to this subject, you could go there.

" Xiao Qiao is so impressive in this story." This is what I kept thinking while reading. Everything about her emotions and words was palpable and powerful, I could feel her pain, rage and also her love for Zhou Yu.
I believe the reason why Xiao Qiao fascinated me so much in this fic, is because during the time I was reading the novel, I have always liked to imagine her as a strong, mature, thoughtful woman and very caring with her husband. This description is very close to how you developped her personality.
Although I could understand Xiao's motivation and views, I also think that Zhuge Liang's responses were realistic and logical (for example, Xiao accused him for the death of her husband, but I believe Zhou Yu was completely responsible for his health). The Shu strategist has an equally dynamique role in the story.
The plot appeared interesting from the beginning despite that the identity of the two initial characters was "hidden". Your ending was good.

Very well written. I was touched by those emotions that you wrote.
Keep on writing!