|Reviews for The Most Important Rule of GunRunning|
| Mister Buch 1/10/11 . chapter 1
Loved this. Having only just watched the movie the 'most important rule' didn't click with me until he said it. Till that moment I was thinking he must mean 'pick a side' but not quite following you :)
I like the way the tone is right in the middle between smarmy and empty. Definitely sounded like our man Mister Cage. Not the bees. If I were to criticise... maybe he made too many jokes. Maybe. You know this movie better than I do.
Very nice little scene, very neatly plotted out. I don't think I've read a monologue by you before! Good.
| WhiteKnight60 3/5/09 . chapter 1
This is really cool. I like the story. I think the best thing about it is that you seem to have really captured Yuri's sarcastic, cynical, and witty character in the way the dialogue runs. Excellent work.
| rutger5000 1/26/09 . chapter 1
Just as awsome as the other story, I really liked the stories you wrote about Lord of War. I hope you make some more.