Great job. I am really enjoying it.

Sorry it's taken me such an age to review this chapter! But what a great chapter! I'm very glad they all got out safely; Earth ships do tend to turn up at the right moment! But as for Ba'al; well that's not looking good! He's relentless when he wants to be! Looking forward to seeing where this is going!

Hey, that's a really good ending. Nice and happy, but lots of lose threads...!! *is impressed*

Now, just some nerky points cause I'm your sister:
- the top paragraph is centralised for some reason.
- if you want this to be the last chapter of this story (and then to upload the "to be continued.." stuff in a new story, which was what I understood on the phone), then you have to go to "edit stories" and under "properties" tick the box that says complete. Otherwise people won't know that it is.

I'm really chuffed that you're going to continue it! The Old Girl was making noises that you wouldn't, that you had too much other stuff to do (ie. real life) but I think this is just so good and I don't know how many other people are reading it, but I'm sure I'm not the only one. MORE PLEASE!

Whew, that was a close one. Saved and yet, still under a great threat. Where's Vala? Anywho, Sam was right. That brilliant mind of hers is always thinking two steps ahead of everyone else. The main thing is, will they find out in time, what Ba'al is planning and will those little bugs interrupt Ba'al's little evil plan? I think old Ba'al is going to be in for a rude awakening and soon. Nice save. That was so cool. hehehehe :D Where's VAla?

I loved your last chapter except for one mistake you made. Carter and Mitchel are the same rank so she would never call him Sir. Otherwise I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Nice

Loved all the McKay comments in this chapter, that man is so sarcastic, but so entertaining with it! I can't help but laugh at some of the things he says. And then the banter between Daniel and Vala was great as well; I haven't watched seasons nine and ten enough to really know what happens from episode to episode, but Daniel and Vala and all their bickering has stayed in my memory and you brought it all flooding back in this chapter! Glad they're out of the city, but kinda worried about the looming explosion! Looking forward to seeing how they get out of this one!

Gah! Talk about cliffhanger, man! This had better mean you have another chapter planned, und zwar ASAP!

As always, I love McKay - hehe, him and driving, lol - and he's so wonderfully annoying even (or especially) at times of certain demise.

On small query though. Why the frell is it all bold??

*with obnoxious hugs*
Jen.

I love the way, Sam had everyone pull their rescources to try and get out of their dire situation, especially McKay. He is so annoying, it's a wonder they haven't thrown him out. Now you have just left them at a junction in a no win situation. Now, how are we suppose to set back and let that happen. You're killing us. hehehehe. I really want to see what happens next. :D

Nice Chap...Do Vala and Danial ever do anything other than argue.

The poor guys just aren't given a break at the moment, it's one disaster after another for them. But I've gotta hand it to Ba'al he really does know what he's doing, it's just a shame that all his cunning and scheming is always against our guys! Hehe!
Great chapter, Ba'al as Prior is a particularly scary thought as is the fact that he now has Ori warships at his beck-and-call. It's not looking good for our lot!
Looking forward to more!

Oh!
*rubs her hands together in delight*
You do such a good Ba'al! I should have gotten you to write ALL my Ba'al scenes, lol.
Anyway, good work as per usual. I think all the characters are nicely done and I love the snerky comments.
Hugs, Jen.

(P.S.) When have I ever NAGGED you to put up a new chapter?!
*chuckles merrily*

Ba'al has alway been a doube crosser. I don't know why they trusted him, but I hope SG1 had a backup plan. 20 minutes is not a lot of time to save themselves. well, we know you live to give us the cliff hangers, so keep us guessing, and hurry up. hehehehe :D

Excellent update.

If I've read you right, Baal has captured two Ori warships, and destroyed the third one. This effectively accounts for all of the Ori warships on the galaxy.

Excellent update.

So Ba'al has captured two of the Ori's three remaining warships left after the Pegasus Project, and if I've read you right, destroyed the third one.

But I do have a question. Where is Adria.