wait.
wait.wait.wait.

Why did you stop there?

huh Huh? Did I miss something?
Did you post the rest somewhere else?

This can't be where you stopped!
No!
Don't do this to me! This was getting so interesting! I was so hoping on meeting Shinichi, so please! Tell me where the rest is!

I really love the way how you describe things, you're such a great writer :)

I assumed the flowers had a significant meaning, so I checked their meanings. xD

Awesome story!! Can't wait for another update to see what happens next! ^^

"In America, it's 'cookies'!"

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Wonderful chapter. I've forgotten that you switch POVs in GaT, but I love it. :3

So...maybe the stranger isn't a ghost after all...my guesses are all wrong T_T

But then maybe Shiho/Ai is the ghost instead. Or maybe the fairy tail isn't real after all... Hmm. A clever, clever story that confuses me. You could say it's not that big a compliment, since I'm easily confused. But I still love this fic XD

Reading further into your descriptions of the stranger, I get the dreaded feeling that the stranger might be Seiya. God forbid. I never liked him. Not that I've seen much of the episodes in which he was in, but still.

And oh at the plot development.

...The fairy tale is complicated O_O

So I suppose "the stranger" is a ghost (of whom?) and that Shinichi has died...? And that's why he hasn't turned up yet even though he's never late?

Uh...I've just realised that you put in Sailor Moon in your disclaimer. It's been years and years since I last watched/read the series...but the guy can't be Mamoru, right? (the first one that comes to mind since "the stranger" has black hair...not sure what Mamoru's eye colour was...)

Ah...ok. So maybe "the stranger" isn't Kaito after all *sweatdrops* Maybe he is an OC...=_=

Hmm...the point of view changed... Took me a couple of paragraphs to get used to it.

I was thinking that the guy could be Kaito, and since Haibara was reminded of "a young magician" (Kid?) my suspicions were increased. XD

Who's "the stranger"?? O_O

I would feel so stupid if it was obvious but I can't figure it out >< There are a few guesses, yes, but I'm not sure...

Ahem. Anyways. This is really nice. Will go read the next chapter now.

Ah, it's been a while since the last times I've read one of your sepia stories.^__^

(sigh)
The flavour of this one...Nostalgia, melancholia, and the bitter flavour of lost illusion whic have lost their sweetness with years...

Like alway, I love the mature and adult feelings trapped in your stories. And, I dunno, this one is a bit strange because I don't know where you're trying to put your reader.

Random, but I love how you've pictured our relationship with past and how we're always rewriting our memories and our own story again and again...
It's just...suited with my won thoughts.

Sorry, not specially constructive, I know...but I'm still addicted to your story.^^

Aww. Gin is cute. *shot!* At first I thought I was still reading the conversation between Ai and Seiya, and the "annoying little brat" confused me for a second. XD

It's all dialogue, but I can picture a grouchy Gin sitting by a chibi-Shiho's bedside. 8D Love Gin's characterization.

Wonderful chapter, FS.

O_o Funky formatting is still funky.

I didn't get an alert from this site, BTW; you might want to make an LJ post (to Aicoholics?) so that people can find it.

FS! *tackles* I've been meaning to comment on this for awhile, but never seemed to fall into the mood for it. But with this chapter, I think the original interest is back in full force. I think we can safely guess that the stranger is Seiya at this point. XD I think it's probably wrong to say this, but I kind of enjoyed the whole Ai having been with every guy she's used to being paired up with in fandom. XDXDXD I'm interested to see where this will go, and whose ghost she actually sees. ^.~ As a random addition, I also enjoy the mention of Kaito. The whole brief fling thing reminds me of NSA for some reason. XDXD Anyways, looking forward to more!