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louise
2009-07-27 . chapter 4
okay this story is realy really good!
Please please keep writing the story. its amazing!!
love it!
minoki
2008-05-21 . chapter 4
very interesting will you be updating this?
Haru Hotaru
2008-03-18 . chapter 4
Heey Wuff!

I realize that this is on hiatus, and you likely won't update as of yet. However, I just wanted to say that I love this story, it's one of my favorite crossover's ever, and I usually hate crossovers. In fact, this is the one out of two Harry Potter crossovers I believe. The rest are as unrealistic as they can get.

But, if you choose to continue, I'd love to read about what the Marauders have planned for 'Proffessor Kenobi', and how Anakin gets bitten by the 'certain werewolf' and Obi-Wan's reaction to that. And...most of all, give Obi-Wan a wake up call! Sheesh, I'm mad at him-he can't seem to understand what Anakin needs, and his reason for giving Anakin detention is very warped. =O

But I did melt when he let Ani go to the Quiditch game =P

~*Haru

PS: Servents of the Force, Qui-Gon's Hiers, and all your HP fics are amazing as well!
Lily Louisea
2008-01-05 . chapter 4
Aww... I really like when they're friendly with each other. its so /cold/ without it. And I really miss them joking...
lidiladilom
2007-10-16 . chapter 4
seems good...
I like that at the end Obi wan allowed Anakin to go and play :)
please continue!!
poof
2007-08-30 . chapter 4
brillaint! i realy enjoyed this. im a fan of both harry potter and star wars and you manage to put them together so well. thank you.
Sentrosi
2007-07-14 . chapter 4
Civ. is bloss!
Doggietail
2007-07-11 . chapter 4
It's a wonder Obi-Wan's still alive in Episode II, you would've expected Madame Pince to have killed him by then. That was really funny. I'm glad Obi-Wan let Anakin go to "Kwittix" tryouts. That was funny.
Elevanya
2007-07-10 . chapter 4
good chapter, update soon!
murdrax
2007-07-09 . chapter 4
hmm very intresting story i really enjoying reading it!
Amrita Glittersong
2007-06-14 . chapter 3
I liked Anakin being confused by the whole ghost thing... I imagine he would be, since the whole 'There is no death, there is only the Force' thing wouldn't fit too great with it (except for the Force Ghosties). And poor Ani, not realizing that everyone in Hogwarts is grumpy in the morning and don't greet the teachers. XD

Oh, I cringed for poor Obi, a lot. Those kids won't know what hit them when he starts showing just how much he really does know about kicking ass--err, I mean, fighting the dark arts. And Ani got what he deserved. XD Fight the peer pressure, Ani!

Ah, Flitwick. He's so cute and cherful. Of course, Ani's a cheater (though I can't blame him since he can't use magic) and I imagine using the Force would certainly be more impressive looking than the Wingardium Leviosa charm.

Great chapter!
Sentrosi
2007-06-13 . chapter 3
Lol, it says that at the bottom of the review screen!

I can't do the next chapter until tomorrow, when my finals are fishnished

I almost got ran over by this old lady in one of those golf cart wheelchair things... she was going like 40 kph, and I had to jump off the sidewalk!
Doggietail
2007-06-13 . chapter 3
Die, James and his friends, die! Sorry, they were really annoying. I thought they didn't learn nonverbal spells until sixth year, and Anakin should only be in fifth. Ouch, that means owls. I think Obi-Wan was a little out of character. He's sometimes harsh with Anakin, but not THAT harsh. Maybe next time, Obi-Wan will know that James is a trouble maker and give HIM the detention. Anakin so did not deserve it.
Sentrosi
2007-06-03 . chapter 2
:)

"It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer."

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APPLE!
Doggietail
2007-06-01 . chapter 2
Hehe.. I hope their's more Obi-Wan in the next chapter
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