I read this story a long time ago, and I came back to it today and realized I hadn't reviewed! I love this story! I particularly love the perspective you've kane: stories from afar, I almost call it ;) I love writing in that style, like, what would Willabeth look from afar?? You didn an excellent job with it! Wonderful story!

A great story. Very good.

very nice. i had always thought she'd probably get pregnat every ten years as long as she was able.

I really enjoyed reading this, especially those gossipy old women x

Keep up the good work!

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Cute! I'm all for the writers' stance on the curse being broken after the first ten years, but I still enjoyed this little fic nonetheless.
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Great. I loved it. Wow.

cute fic!

nice!

serves them right this is really good

Aw! That's cute! And really funny! Reminds me of Mrs. Rachel Lynne in "Anne of Green Gables"... heehee. You should keep going. this'd makea wonderful story. =)

Awesome story. Really amusing to listen to those gossipy village women. Because we all know that Elizabeth, a woman claiming marrige with no husband, pregnant, and with pirate cohorts would be so well recieved. Wonderful job. And don't worry about the people who keep telling you Will was freed from his bonds after ten years. I think that even if the creaters did say so, it wasn't in the movie, and so it doesn't quite exsist. And why should Will get special treatment? Davy Jones did his job for ten years, even if Calypso wasn't there. He wasn't freed.

Yeah, I agree with those other reviewers, Will does in fact get to stay on land with Elizabeth for good. But that doesn't change the fact that this fic is wonderfully written! And a second child, oh, how sweet! :D

Heh...I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who wondered what the local gossipmongers thought of Elizabeth during those ten years she waited for Will.

As noted by another reviewer, the curse was broken and Will was able to come home for good, but nevertheless...this is a well-written, entertaining fanfic.

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Nicely written...but you have to know the curse was broken after the first 10 years and Will was able to stay with Liz and son...