lol...that was funny! :)

good storyline

This was an absolutely wonderful fanfic. It took me a while to understand the actual depth of meaning you were trying to convey, especially in the last section of the story, but now that i get it, i think its subtly beautiful. Congratulations on the writing of a great story, and the poem too. I hope you continue writing them.

great story keep up the good work update soon

In a somewhat fluffy and silly way, this was actually a really good fic. Although, why people find Haiku hard to write, I don't know. Making good Haiku on the other hand...

Wow That WAS SO Good! That poem was a heartbreaker. I don't care who you are, some one writes a poem like for you, you are a gonner! It would be like playing an Earth, Wind and Fire Song, somebody gonna get some lovin' tonight! Oh Darn, just blew my age didn't I?

I really liked this story.. short though it is. You've encapsulated Harry and Hermione's dilemma really well and put their entire relationship into the context of a poem. I have to say that it's brave to do...because it takes a great deal more creativity and thoughtfulness to do it than to just write a 'plain old love scene'.

Good job, my friend. It's stories like this that separates you and puts you above many other writers.

Regards,

the_scribbler

Bow chicka bow bow

I think I'm going to have to show this one to my dad. He'll appreciate the limericks :D Oh, and... *adds to favourites*

Ron was hilarious here. :)

And Harry's such a romantic. :)

Cheers!

That poem is... I cried that's all I have to say... Pity the fool who doesn't fall after that. Fall in lurv, that is!

wow that was really good, and for some reason it made me tear up! great job

see-the-way

Very nice oneshot.

Once again, a wonderful one shot from one of my favorite authors. I loved Ron in this, he was so sarcastic,“Merlin, don’t look now, but Samurai Harry is in the house.” That line was brilliant, it had me choking on my pie. (Yes, i eat pie and read fanfiction. Thank god for multitasking.) Hope to see another one shot soon!

woow, very good!
I am happy someone writes in a way that does not offend writers intelligence, but allows them to wonder and think. wow.