your totally updating soon right!? ok this story is mondo tubuloso dude! ok so i totally spelled that wrong... but the story is great! you wrote the turtles personalities perfectly!

wow!! this is great. i really hope you get around to finishing it :)

Very awesome! and i actually just finished watching season 5 yesterday XD yay for great timing =D Love this story! Very well written! I can picture every scene and the dialogue is perfect ^-^ I really hope to read more soon!

Thanks bunches for sharing!
Tippy

I love this story and I am so interested on what is going to happen next. I know that RL can be a lot sometimes but I hope that you have not forgotten this wonderful work. I have to know if my guesses about what is going on are right or not! o_o

I wonder what the connection is between Leo and Adam that is not shared with all the turtles. I also wonder how Splinter thinks he has an idea of what happened, if it really is because of Leo's time away from the others. The last few lines especially were incredible. I hope there's more soon!

I'm so happy you updated! And that there's more Mikey in this chapter.

First off, loved the capitalization in 'Wrath Of Raph', and the line:

'"Exploding?" Mikey supplied helpfully.'

He's such the irrepressible kid at heart, always glomming on to the gorier more melodramatic way of expressing things. His mental image of his brother's possible injury made me cringe. I also thought it cute and kid-like for him to shy away from a different image of Karai. The 'low cheerful tones of Michelangelo holding a one-sided conversation' underscored Mikey's optimistic nature. He'll talk to a coma patient if there's an off chance of getting through!

His personality is so different than Raph's. Raph broods and plots while Mikey bounces back.

I really liked the injection of mystery with Splinter's cryptic words. It moved the plot along nicely, as did the unexpected scene change to Florida. What a shock, going from idyllic family scene at the beach to the sudden confrontation. Way to catch your readers off guard!

I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, thanks to your cliffhanger.

Omgosh! Poor Adam! He was one of my fave acolytes (excluding the turtles of course, lol). The whole family atomosphere with him though was so cute!
But that Demon is EVIL! Gr. And very intriguing... Was it in the lost season, or is it a concoction of your own? (if it is, well done! It's perfectly evil. lol)
I'm glad Leo tis okay. *huggles turtle*
Hope to find the next update soon! Kudos on the great chapter.
xx

Dude.

Is he an Utrom Guardian? That was my first guess, though I don't know if they have anything to do with demons, traditionally.

The demon-thingy is spiffy. And scary.

Oh. *lightbulb appears over head* I think I just... this is set post-season-five, isn't it? (Ah yes, I just checked the summary). *squints at Karai speculatively*. Of course, I might be totally off, but I now have slight suspicions as to where the plot's going (in a good way!).

I'm hooked! What's Leo going to say when he wakes up? Who's Adam? What's up with the voices in Karai's head? Etc.

Looking forward to more!

Toki too lazy to logg in

wow your bringing in the other medallion wearers. I was really confused by the end part until the medallion was stated. but thats a cool idea. cant wait for more.

Loving this story! Great mix of action and dialogue, with near spot-on characterisations. Good job!

E! I was so happy when I saw you had updated! Don't feel too bad about the long wait...I'm just as bad :D
This story is getting more interesting as you go along, I'm really enjoying it. Keep 'em coming!

Oh, very interesting. I'm guessing it has to do with Karai absorbing the demon energy from the Shredder. I did sorta wonder about that. Actually, I wondered if they planned it that way to bring Karai back as a really nasty enemy. But I'm interested in what you're doing here.

Not bad not bad at all! Can't wait for some more, though the involvement of OCs usually puts me off. That's the mark of GREATNESS *sparkles* in a tale! When an OC doesn't make me say eugh and back away slowly. This is practically creepy!

Really like this story Adelphi, I'm intrigued by whats going on. and Cant wait for more answers. beautiful writing as always my friend.

Keep up the good work

~T

ARGH! X_X
What the hell is going on! O_O
I can'T even ask anything soo confusing..
Too exciting PLEASE CONTINUE! *u*

you surely chased my lonelyness again and turned it into new energy and excitement! *w*
Man I just wish I could have all the time to draw some of these scenes too! TTwTT

gah...aynway..i just want to say that you are amazing! and I'm really looking forward to see (read) more from you! *w*
(i secretly hope that you continue soon this one XD)