   LovelySparrow
2008-11-30 . chapter 1Dude, angst much... |
 garaXxXhinata69
2008-08-25 . chapter 1i loved it. so poetic... |
sara
2007-11-05 . chapter 1 beautiful. |
 Kindre Turnany
2007-07-16 . chapter 1I liked this very much.
But you should consider using "was" less, and the last sentence should say "he" not "him." |
Alex
2007-05-30 . chapter 1 Perfect. Deep and beautiful. |
 Every Dog Has Its Day
2007-05-30 . chapter 1Nice, x fin escribes algo. El esta pensando en Sakura, no? aunke siendo como eres tu, eres capaz de haberlo puesto pensando en Naruto. ¬¬ jajaja pues nada me ha gustado. Escribi yo un shorty tb del pekeño sasuke...aunke el tuyo es bastante bastante bastante bastante bastante bastante mejor. yay. lol.
Saludos desde Do-Exams-Till-You-Die Country. |
 Karichi
2007-05-29 . chapter 1-looks around- ok what happend to Naruto? did something bad happen?... |
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