Reviews for Mr Boddy's Will

Spiralheart 2008-05-12 ch 2, anon.	abusedon't know if this really matters anymore but i do like your story and would be thrilled if you did finish it.
fiction writer 2007-09-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseTry to show more than tell. You describe Mr. Green as being greasy, but I don't see it. Try to work on finding the right words to show your reader rather then telling them how they should see characters
Fairy Red 2007-06-15 ch 2,	abuseHey, I do want you to finish! These are pretty good! I wanna know what happens next! What will they do with each other? I hope you continue...pretty please? I'll wait and see! :D