 WestSide Love 2008-01-31 . chapter 1So cute, so adorable! I couldn't even pick a favorite one. This is so FLUFF and I'm loving it! |
 MinokaintheShadows 2007-08-02 . chapter 1This is amazing simple as that |
 trini-jason 2007-06-27 . chapter 1 I loved your story even tough my name says trin and jason I am also a big fan of raven and robin their so cute together I hope that you right more fictions... |
 ravenslair 2007-06-12 . chapter 1I liked this very much (smiles), and of course I think you shoud write more. But then, I can never get enough Rob/Rae from you (hint, hint). Sorry for the late review, it's been crazy around here lately. Please keep on writing, I will never get enough. Thanks...Gerry |
 rachel 2007-06-09 . chapter 1 I like it a lot! It's new and even though it's not a story, It sort of weaves one with each sentence...It's a cool way to do a story, and I like the words/themes that you chose...nicely done! I LOVE your stories!! Write more!! |
 shadeofsound23 2007-06-06 . chapter 1Are these available for use or are you going to use them? I think I've got a few ideas for some of them and I wanted to know if I could use them.
Thanks!
SoS23 |
 kikkii 2007-06-05 . chapter 1i missed you so much! welcome back!
i loved this kind of style. kinda reminds me of irebel's "century egg"
not anybody can pull this off. but you did!
keep up the good work alena, i missed reading your stories.
i look forward to more updates.
keep on rockin' ;)
xoxo
kiki |
 superheroxnerd 2007-05-31 . chapter 1aww, i love this!
i really like the different takes on the relationship!
faboo job! =] |
 ChErIsHeD21 2007-05-31 . chapter 1that's a really sweet story. Im glad you made it |
 suckkkit 2007-05-30 . chapter 1Ohmygosh.
I love it.
Dude.
I even cried.
Because I just broke up with my boyfriend.
And we've been together for a year and two months.
And god.
This little one-shot made me think about all those memories
I had with my ex-boyfriend.
Anyways, please update your other stories.
You're an amazing writer. |
 raven-shadowsong3 2007-05-30 . chapter 1LOVE IT!! I'll always love your story!! |
 D-I-WaRrIa 2007-05-30 . chapter 1You know what...
I think you just converted me...
Hell, I still prefer XStar.. but this oneshot (list, *shrug*) shows compassion and the pain/joy of a relationship without going into detail or being melodramatic or completely sappy...
This is so enviable that I'm gonna congratulate you before I do something stupid... Like start revising for my GCSE's.
Anyway... my first review in over a year... I think I'm a lil rusty.
Keep writing Alena, Lord knows fanfiction needs decent writers.
~L.x |
 DataX 2007-05-29 . chapter 1Its really nice and simple. Its not always a kiss that shows chemistry between 2 people. Sometimes it's just a simple hug or a sentence with a hidden meaning behind it. I think you really did that wel.
With love,
DataX ^^ |
 me 2007-05-29 . chapter 1 loved it!
everything you write is...amazing!
i have read & re-read all of your stories many times over and all i have to say is... WOW!
you keep writing & i'll keep reading!
;D ttfn |
 Val-Creative 2007-05-29 . chapter 1Anyone who throws anything at you will be losing the ability to swallow, run, throw, and reproduce. Mwahhaha. Anyway, cold hard truth, eh? I didn't see anything that seemed overly corny or drawn out to be considered 'romantic', it seemed to be right on that level of cute but serious. My favorite lines had to be 28 (I'm a perv), 29 (I'm a sucker for the defenseless guys), 34 (new perspective of Raven stated), 37, and 40 (adorable). Overall, a good warmup, I can't wait to see those updates of chapter stories you were speaking of. ^-^
~ Val |