Reviews for Singular Memory

Reviews For: Singular Memory

Shido21 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseI read this story quite a while ago and I didn't review and I'm sorry for that because this is excellent. You have captured both the characters' personalities and voices so well. I really love your voice for Rikku. It captures all of the quirkiness of the character. I must say that you have inspired me a bit with the story I am currently working on and you nearly brought tears to my eyes towards the end of yours. I hope that you keep writing.
Captain Lynza 2007-11-20 ch 1,	abuse^_^ snort-giggle Aww...
Bratney 2007-07-29 ch 1,	abuseI love it!
Lady Genjutsu 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was really awesome! It's a very realistic development between Rikku and Auron. Your writing style is really mature and accurate when telling this story. It's more of a platonic view of our two beloved ffX characters, but its still cute and better still, believable. Good stuff, you were always one of my favourite Aurriku writers!
oddlyintrospective 2007-06-09 ch 1,	abuseLovely characterization. Great story, but in particular I love the beginning few lines. And this one: "curled into a ball of blond and blankets." Yeah. Props for that line. I'm a sucker for alliteration. Keep up the awesome writing! :)
Fwe 2007-05-30 ch 1,	abuseCan I have your talent? Seriously, you've made me into a jealous person. ;) Loverly writerings. Me likes. The imagery made me smile and I love Rikku's characterization. Very nicely pulled off. Specifically: "I thought at first he was going to place it there, warm and comforting like pops would do and I was really concerned that he’d gone all bonkers on me – he rotated the joint until his palm was up, and then… A pyrefly, beautiful, and a deep hue of green and gold, emerged lazily from his skin. It fluttered there for a moment, investigating the orange fabric of my tummy, touching it hesitantly. It was warm. And then something fell right threw it, onto his palm. Offended at the attack, the pyrefly returned to its owner, but the attack continued upon the man’s bared hand. It took me a sec to realize they were my own tears." And I found the comment about the grain of Bikanel's and Besaid's sand wonderfully thoughtful for some odd reason. Overall (before I get to ranting), a wonderful job. Rusty? snort Wish I could be rusty like that... ~Ren
rikku-thief 2007-05-30 ch 1,	abuseI actually shed a tear. That was beautifully written and will bring a smile to my memories too :) Thanks!
CultivateYourHunger 2007-05-30 ch 1,	abuseOmg, I love your writing talent soo much...if that makes sense. Basically I love this story and I'm as jealous as hell of your ability to write these two, keep writing its so good!
Alice001 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abusethat was the cutest one shot i have read! it was so sweet! I loved it
Yasashi Kaze 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseIt's been a while since you've written FFX. Nice to have you back. :) Great story!
Katmillia 2007-05-29 ch 1,	abuseGne!! You wrote!! And it was so awesomely pretty! I liked this one-shot a lot, it was very poignant and self-containing and pretty much awesome. :D

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