Quads aren't fun to run into...I know! One of our pass throughs in indoor is between the basses and the upper battery-I've been clocked by our captian multiple times during practice that I'm beginning to get quad bruises in addition to my bass bruises. =P But it's all for drumline!
Snow days are love. We had one on Friday too.

Great chapter - they are really moving forward on the show. However, you've got a number of spelling mistakes and that always distracts people.

I think you mean a 'ballad' and not 'ballot.' Right? Go through again and double check spellings.

Taped -> tapped, etc.

Courtney

Move-ins! And poor kiwi, i hate the completely psychotic sets, and yet love them at the same time, ya know . . .

oh i like it Kelly
we all know what it feels
to have Mike Gains hate you

i glad you posted again :)

Hey, I like it. You should have had Brain kiss her though... Anyways, I did catch a few grammar mistakes, but I don't remember were they are.

Poor Kiwi, when Mike hates you , he hates you.

Great chapter!

Hey you- not gonna use your real name..

I really like it- but remember Corps... Dragons... (which by the way, was that taken from a baseball team?)

Oh, and I luvers Brain. Still haven't figured out who he is in 'real' life...

sorry, i would have reviewed earlier, however, my computer was mis-behaving...never-the-less; I liked the chapters. Of course i like the story and the characters, so how could I not like hearing about what happens to them. While I'm anxious to get back to the dragons, I'm glad you tell of kiwi's life outside the corp, it seems like someone could have over emphasized that portion of her life and left out any room for poor kiwi, emily and brian's characterization.

Great chapter! I love that CD by Michael Buble! :D

So So So Good! The last chapter was one of your best in a long time. Great pacing and dialogue.

My favorite lines (actually made me laugh out loud):

Leave it to Brian to go on yet another philosophical voyage in the middle of prom.

“You look amazing,” Em said as I emerged from the bathroom.

“I feel like a **.”

“Shut up. You look great.”

Also, mad props for using Buble. He is awesome.

Finally, sounds like my junior prom - we ditched it and went to Waffle House. :) Yay!

okay.
now im frustrated.
it is SO obvious he was about to kiss her.
gr!

haha.
lovely chapter.
cant wait till she starts move-ins.
:D

Brian almost sounds too perfect to be true, scrach that, Brian is too perfect to be true. Give him some annoying habit so he's real. Part of really liking someone is excepting them not only for their vertues, but also their faults (just like in friendship). So give Brian some faults for Kiwi to deal with (I agree though (with the unvoiced thought), it would be nice if guys were like that...).

Giving Kiwi another goal to reach, nice. But I would sugest makinger her sucead a little every once in a while. I think that stories where the main character is great at everything suck, but a little positive experience keep a story from being depressing.

Loved the story of her nickname. I also like how you used truth or dare as a bonding exercise, i don't think an all guy corp would do that, so really drives home the all girls thing. I still don't know how a person can act like a monkey while standing on their head though (maybe that's just because I can't satnd on my head to begin with).

The sarcastic nature of beth is rather endearing. Keep it up.