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| Tygercat2 2008-05-25 ch 3,  | abuseO! Can't wait to read more! But, if you have read New Moon, you kno9w Bella would not go kiss some guy right after the love of her life broke up with her. |
| TopazForever 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abusewo please keep writing?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? |
| TempestStormBFFofMax 2007-06-28 ch 3, | abusedidn't turn out how i thought. i like this ch. alot though. |
| LovesIllusion 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abuseIt was very different. I was just really confused, Because Edward can't read Bella's mind and vampires can't cry... It was interesting though. |
| iluvcarby101 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abuseomfg!! she CANT be kissing him! |
| MarryMeTopaz 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseGood some explaination! Me no likey Aaron...(let me explain) Me likey Brian! But oh well... -see I wasn't too harsh- ~MMT |
| Topaz in the Meadow 2007-06-13 ch 3, | abuseNO NO NO! U FREAKING RETARD! NO NO NO! UGH! I CANT BELIEVE U ACTUALLY HAD THE NERVE TO DO THAT! HE CANT JUST BREK UP WITH HER! CAREY IS EVIL! U R SO MUCH LIKE HER! EVIL I TELL YOU EVIL! -angelic smile- |
| TempestStormBFFofMax 2007-06-12 ch 2, | abuseOMG! that was so good. i'll keep looking for when it gets up dated. but plse i have one question... what's gonna happen? you're making a love triangle right now and it's really good. |
| Topaz in the Meadow 2007-06-06 ch 2, | abuseYou idiot! His name is Brian Aaron... His name is not Aaron! You are so freakin retarded! You told marrymetopaz who told me his name was Brian Aaron. I dont care if I am being the bad guy in this but i mean honestly. you are my friend, but if you want the honest truth, you need to stick with his actual name! also, marrymetopz and i agree that bella and edward are WAY ooc! we no bella would NEVER do that. also in the first chapter, bella would never make a bet like that with edward! omg! do it right next time! Sincerely, topaz in the meadow = D |
| Heather427 2007-06-05 ch 2, | abuseits great! kep up the good work. aaron is so nice! |
| anoyomous 2007-06-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseyes i do! |
| Katherine Mason 2007-06-05 ch 2, | abusei will have an nonexistant kind of trouble hating Carey... |
| CHERRY 2007-06-05 ch 2, anon. | abuselove AARON! |
| MarryMeTopaz 2007-06-05 ch 2, | abuseI thought we decided on green eyes with a blue ring in them. (I was helping her with them) ~MMT |
| Topaz in the Meadow 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseok retard (i am her friend i can call her this) 1 mr edmonds is not bella's reading teacher. he is your last years reading teacher. 2 EDWARD CANT READ BELLA'S MIND! 3 edward is WAY ooc! 4 you are not suppossed to lead them straight to us. sorry but this is all true! just some constructive critism from one of your bestestest buddies! topaz in the meadow |