A great story. Very good.

AWW!! How about I SO cried when Norrington was killed off in AWE? I was a wreck! And I knew he was going to die before I saw the movie! DEPRESSION!
Anyhoo, I LOVED the conversation, and Norrington's confession makes him very human contrary to popular belief that he is the essensceof perfection. A job well done! Continue as a story if you can!

Ta,
Erica =))

i enjoyed this story, but felt you could have done a little more with it. good job thought