Hi, this was a really good chapter! Yay we finally understand the title of the story! Woot! Poor Eragon. I hate the flipping shades. I hope they come to a terrible demise. :D

I like this new twist in the story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

Hm... Kitenza really is more evil than she lets on. I like that!

Good job, Freya! It's about time she took matters into her own hands!

I hope you don't mind me saying, but Layrn and Kitenza are really quite interesting to read about. I always have been one to love a couple of great villains. You characterize them very well.

Poor Freya. I do fell sorry for her and Eragon.

You could have used a bit more detail in the fight sequence, but otherwise, well done!

Ah, the everlasting love between a Rider and her dragon. Simply lovely.

Hm... Layrn and Kitenza are very interesting characters, aren't they? I don't usually read Eragon stories, but this one has caught my interest particularly.

a love this story ...i hope you update soon !!

Hi, this was amazing! Layrn is so evil and horrible. But there was zing in this chap between Freya and Eragon! Yay! I liked this chap, I think it could have been a bit longer but other then that pretty good!

Awesome chapter. The elves in this story, the way you've written (very well, I might add) remind me a little bit of the Vulcans on Star Trek, because they believe in order, and not showing too much emotion. Vuclans believe in all that, plus logic. I wonder how anyone gets married on that planet. *wink* :D Keep it up! I want to know what happens next.

So far, this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I wish you luck in continuing. Now, back to the story.

was the brand the skull? please update i love this story

love the story and chapter. update soon