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2009-07-28 . chapter 1
next chapter make anna slap(hard!)hao
gemaima11
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter. :) please update soon.
crysty
2009-03-19 . chapter 1
it was cool but anna is more ...i don't know in this chapter she looked weak hope the next is better:)
crysty8334
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
i love it O_O i can't wait to see what hao will do
SilverySnow
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
Congratulations, ma'am, you have gotten my attention.
Nightglider-star
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
ooh...that was good too...anyway update!
Lone Silver Angel
2007-06-09 . chapter 1
Update soon!
Aly the Trickster
2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Yay for you! Brilliant prologue!
Sorry I didn't review earlier, I was really tired...but anyways, thank you for making this. It starts the new story well, and I can't wait for you to continue it. You should add the chapter of Guilty Pleasure to this. And please make it a lemon story, I haven't read a good one in a while, and your pretty much the only writer I know who is good enough to make a lemon story that I actually like.
There was one grammar mistake, though. You said:
He smiled the smile she noticed that was almost identical to Yoh’s, only more sinister.
The sentence doesn't really make sense, you could say:
He smiled. She noticed that the smile was almost identical to Yoh's, only more sinister.
I don't know if the sentence was meant that way, but I thought you'd like to know!
Keep on writing with your brilliance,
~Aly
Damned And Fabulous
2007-05-29 . chapter 1
That was a good start. Please update soon.
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