Nicely done! I really love it, Check out my poem, it's called "Beast"

really cool poem I like the warewolf mataphor.

This is a really thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed how you used the metaphor of the werewolf to contrast good and evil in a human heart. The last line of the poem is really intriging.

I liked it! It was a really good poem. :D

Good pome, very relevant subject, cool metaphorical twist...yea I'd say that I really liked this. Good work. Some people might feel the Lychan metaphor is not Christian, but the Bible speaks about evil inside people all the time. I had a real sense of Romans 7:14-20 ("...what I want to do I do not do, but what I hate I do...") when I read this. I'm wondering if it was partially responsible for inspiring you to write this? If it wasn't you should read that passage. I think you would like it. Again good job.

This is...disturbingly similar to some of my own struggles recently.
Also extremely good; particularly the last line. Good job!
Ah, the unattainability of werewolf-dom.

What an interesting concept, about using the metaphor of the werewolf as representing the battle between good and evil that's inside of us. Its similar to an episode on a tv show that I saw once, but it used vampires to show how tempting evil can be.