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melissa
2008-11-06 . chapter 2
OMG you need to continue it.. i love the idea of the story and it can go a lot of great places! your writing is really good too!!
othlove419
2007-12-05 . chapter 2
yes, continue.
it's good.
luvnaley23
2007-11-09 . chapter 2
I hope you plan on continuing this story... I really liked the story.
xlovetreehillx
2007-11-09 . chapter 2
continue with this sotry please, i love it.
23naley03
2007-11-08 . chapter 2
please keep going. its a good story. and just a suggestion...im a huge naley fan and lots of people write stories about them being secretly in love but too afraid to tell each other and just a hint its not cool when you spend the whole story talking about them dancing around their feelings and then end with them getting together. get them togehter as sonn as is possible with your story idea and then talk about them together. just a small tip you dont have to follow or anything but please keep going. its really good.
Naley
2007-11-08 . chapter 1
Awesome start!
I can't wait to read more!
OTHlover04
2007-11-08 . chapter 2
you should definetely pick it up again! can't wait:)
SeRa.RoCkS
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved every word of it. I'm not kidding.
Laffertysgrl
2007-06-23 . chapter 1
this is good!please update!
ALI
2007-06-14 . chapter 1
I love it! please please please update VERY soon!!
ALI
Just Like PEYTON
2007-06-07 . chapter 1
You really need to UD soon!! this story rocks and your a great writer!
TutorGal23
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
really good so far. update soon!
23NaleyLVR23
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
Its good, please update again soon!
loveu2much
2007-06-01 . chapter 1
I really like the concept,and I like where it is going. Aww Jenny is the cutest thing ever. I love Naley so update soon.
othoveee
2007-06-01 . chapter 1
i like it. and i really like the quote on the end, becuase its soo true. and i like this storyline how nathan is in love with haley, but their only friends..yeah update!
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