Sorry about not reviewing for forever. I've been mega-grounded.

Anyway, this chapter seems a bit . . . rushed?

Maybe it's the lack of separate paragraphs and paragraph indentations.

But aside from that, this was a fairly okay chapter. Keep up the good work!

-Royal

Aw, a dedication to me. I'm flattered.

And Matron Obladra's first name is K'yorl.

E! This sounds really interesting. I'll be one entranced reader. Post more soon.