nice, but have more paragraphing please.

Okay, I got completely lost here... But then I asked my husband if he knew anything about Forgotten Realms, and it turns out he's read all of that stuff! So I just read the whole story to him (while he was playing computer games! LOL!) and he says it's brilliant, he loves the parallels between the drow and the Sith... Anyway, great chapter - now that I've had a basic course in Forgotten Realms it makes perfect sense! I really appreciated all the details & visual images you included, because it's all new to me - I can really picture it from what you wrote here! Looking forward to the next chapter (and now my husband is too! Hee!)

I don't know anything about Forgotten Realms, but this is fascinating! I've always wondered how Palpatine started out! Looking forward to more! :)

Crossovers aren't supposed to be in here.
Follow the rules next time, kay?