 Rose93darkness 2007-11-28 . chapter 3i luv this please udpate the next one |
 Desolate Nightmare 2007-10-11 . chapter 3This is really good so far >>
Can't wait for an update ^^ |
 jodem 2007-10-10 . chapter 3oh. cliffie.
update soon! |
 kingdomheartsbiggestfan 2007-10-10 . chapter 3 i love this fic it is so interesting.my fav idea i rikus parents.XD |
 expletive deleted 2007-10-10 . chapter 3This is really cool. I like that so many Disney characters are being used in the story, and the original characters are weird and interesting. Looking forward to more! |
 tennisdesi91 2007-10-09 . chapter 3wow .. nie story ... i can't wait to see how this story progresses |
 Evil Bunny of Death 2007-10-09 . chapter 3cool!1 |
 ffkingdom 2007-08-26 . chapter 2hey i really like this story! i cant wait to find ou t what happens next. keep up the great work~ |
 jodem 2007-08-23 . chapter 2I like this story! Update ASAP! |
 Sorceress of Memories 2007-07-16 . chapter 1I really like this idea for your story. It's far more original than making Riku being related to Sephiroth or Kadaj, which is a wee bit overdone. You make me really wish I watched the film now. |
 Just-A-Fan 2007-06-15 . chapter 1 Wow, I think every other reviewer summed up my thoughts here. Loved Kida's Reaction!, Loved Moses Mickey (Thanks to the events of "Sorcerer's Apprentice") and you get 50 points for the obscure Toy Story reference concerning Sora's parents! Makes me wonder who Sora's mom is.
Please continue this soon! |
 zalixethbe 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Hello, zalixethbe here, just commenting on the fic! Well, I guess I told you by aim mostly how I felt about it, but I thought I should also leave a proper review. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm excited by this fic! I feel a bit slow about not picking up on Riku's parents, but now I want to watch that movie. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! =) |
 Wayya 2007-06-05 . chapter 1Nice premises~ I love you for making them Riku's parents (makes totally sense! The look from his mother, the need to go explore new horizons from his father...). My only critic is that Kida's reaction seems a bit disproportionate (she was aggressive when she met Milo but she didn't know him and she was trying to protect herself). But maybe this will be explained in the next chapters, so it's okay. You made me curious XD
I hope you will continue to explore further Atlantis' setting :3 |
 KHfan 2007-06-02 . chapter 1 Rikune...Rikunem...ehh...since I'm too lazy to look it up, I'll just say that that was really clever! Though I thought Riku's mom was overreacting a bit, I never thought his family was THAT strange. Though it seem King Mickey has a lot on his mind. Can't wait to see what next chapter brings! |
 The Walker of Dreams 2007-06-01 . chapter 1So, the fiction starts off with a good deal of promise, that being a quote from Meet the Robinsons, which is a very sadly ignored (but fabulous) movie.
It then picks up with good in character interaction (or ICI if you wish to make a short form of it) and a Mickey!Moses.
Add in finding out Riku's parents (which were not Tifa and Sephiorth, thank god), mix in ominousness, and a cliff hanger.
What do you get?
A next chapter! *grins, brick'd*
Seriously though, this is a lovely start, everything you'd want to find at the start of a fanfiction. The foreshadowing is nice, along with the promise of more Atlantis stuff (which is an awesome movie k plz thnx).
I'm interested in seeing where this will lead, and I can't wait till you bring in Wakka and the gang. *is looking forward to the interactions*
One teeny tiny thing? ""Oh, have you?" Riku said sharply, glaring in his direction. "I was leaning on your
shoulder almost the entire time after."" Me thinks you didn't mean to press enter there?
Good luck with planning, and may this fic flourish~! (ever after Kingdom Hearts 3 comes out)
~Walker (aka Alice) |