Oh my but that was wonderful. And sure I'm getting to it a day latter, but it matter's not. Even if you don't finish, which I still would like you to, there has already been quite a substantial thrill from it. Wonderfully sexy bit of writing here!

I'm stopping now. Seriously. Cause I do have a paper to write and getting caught up in the elaborate sexy steaminess of this is just not gonna get the thing written. But oh I so want to just get caught up!

:O Okay, I knew you were a brilliant artist with the GND comics, but holy **, this is fantastic.

Oh my god, this was great! Absolutely the best and longest make-out I've ever read, and the chicken race! The chicken race!

I would love to see further chapters of this story.

I have to say this is by far the best distraction of my year.

Loved, loved, loved this fic. Though, it was fairly awkward when I was on chapter eight, and my mum looked over my shoulder and asked what I was reading; I don't think I've ever been so flustered.

Seriously though, your descriptions were so intoxicatingly vivid and hypnotisingly beautiful; you should be proud of this story and should definitely consider writing a book, or something! You have undeniable talent, and it shouldn't be wasted.

ohplease,ohplease,ohplease,ohplease,ohplease,ohplease, OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE,OHPLEASE
PLEASE please PLEASE please PLEASE please PLEASE please PLEASE
CONTINUE! :D
its sexy, but with a great plot and very IC and ohgoodness, just a great, fun fanfiction read that dosent leave me feeling like the orignal movie has been beaten with a so-very-bad-writing-its-giving-me-a-headace stick.

i know its been ages, but heres hopeing its not abandoned, and that your still alive out there. i followed the link from your deviantart, and oh dear, i just dont know what to do if this is it. will sarah ever get her clothes back? will she and jareth have more wild monkey, sorry, goblin sex? will sarah win the annual chicken dash race? i gotta know!
-mila

Rawr. That is one sexy fanfic. MOAR! :D

Well, my goodness, missie. Are you ever going to update this?! Not to sound impatient but... I'm impatient!

No pressure, just wondering. :)

I love, love, love this!! I've only recently gotten into Labyrinth fanfiction and this is definitely one of the best I've read so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Your pictures on DeviantArt are fantastic as well.

i love it!

Absolutely love the story so far; I like the original take you have on it and I can't wait to see what you have in store next! Keep up the amazing writing ;D

Oh my god, I can't stop laughing! I'm sitting at my computer, doubled over in hysterics, and my family is looking at me like I'm nuts! This is great! I saw the t-shirt pictures on deviantart, and I followed the link, totally not expecting such brilliance! Your style and attention to detail just blew me away! I can't wait to hear more of this!

Oh my dear God. YOU ARE BRILLIANT!

while the cut scene is dreadfully captivating, i'm afraid i'm going to have to prefer this upcoming - hopefully meaningful - talk they still need to get through with?