I got a 0 on my online quiz because my stinkin' computer wasn't working correctly. >:( So, I decided to read one of your stories to feel better. And even though this wasn't the happiest stories, it succeeded. :) Thank you for writing such a beautiful story that was able to cheer me up (even though it was a sad (yet so powerful) story). :) And I always love an emotional out of character Shego. XD

Critiques:
1. she could stand - I think you mean "couldn't stand". Because if Shego COULD stand the look in Kim's eyes, she wouldn't be as forgiving.
2. "C'mon! The others' be looking for us soon!" - I think you mean the others'll or the others will be looking for us. I could be wrong and just misreading though.

P.S. What does verandah mean? I've never heard of it before. I also think it's a misspelling, but Spell Check could just be wrong. :P

Anyway... favorited! As always. :)

its good but who is "Him" in the last sentence?

so shego died here as well... good for her at least she'll be with kim forever... thank you...

This is so sad. I love it! I shed a tear. =]

i enjoyed it, good one.

Very poetic and touching, the thing I'm wondering is how did Kim die? Did I miss something?

Aw! So sad! I love it a lot though! Where did you get the lyrics or poem from? Did you create it?(The stuff in italics, I mean)

I wonder who Kim cheated with? Not bad; a bit confusing but still a nice tragedy.

This was a touching little story.
Shego's not wanting to leave Kim grave...and subsequently being reunited with Kim in death, after being overcome by the cold weather...mixed in with some of her memories, was very nice.

aww... that was beautiful!