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WaterJogger
2009-03-10 . chapter 33
Just wondering when you are going to update again. This is a great story and I'd really like to see it continue.
merder4lifetime
2009-02-15 . chapter 3
This should have been the way it was written. My compliments, it never made sense that after 11 years of marriage she just left for LA and they never talked. The way you've incorporated, and especially after the "crossover" fiasco, was just much better than they way that was forced on us to learn more about them. I'd expect that this could have been a scene between them.
merder4lifetime
2009-02-15 . chapter 2
Was searching for a good Mer/Der to read and glad I found this, there's not may of their fics rated M, just discovered that today. Look forward to reading the unexplored scenes on Grey's... I decided to the the same after 4.11 and it is challenging. Like what you've done thus far, good insight to their feelings.
Nanou0111
2009-01-30 . chapter 33
Oh my god... that's so good !
You have to update this fic ! Please please please ! I know it's been a while but I really hope you'll get back to it !
I spend my day in front of my computer, reading it ! I went through all emotions !
Thank you for this story ! I love reading you !
I hope I'll be able to review soon ;)

Anne
mrsmcdreamy29
2009-01-24 . chapter 33
Wow...so I just read all 30 chapters in like 2 hours and girl you are awesome.

I read how you think you are too old to be writing fanfiction. Says who. If you are great at it and you enjoy it...go for it.

I am also a BIG fan of AriaAdagio...her fic was the first one I read on here and it is hard to live up to her excellence, but I have to say you are close.

I really would love for you to continue, but I know how writers block is as I have experienced it myself. I dont post on her yet but I am published on Surgical Language and the Greys McBoard.

Keep up the excellent work and I hope to see this updated soon.

MrsMcDreamy29 aka Stephanie
egrey
2008-11-09 . chapter 32
I LOL at the "if the cap fits or something." You slipped that one in really well...seemed natural and not forced. Just found this story yesterday. I was originally skeptical of the erectile dysfunction as a plot but you surprised me. It really does work for them to "start again". Where did the gossip go? Ideas for dates (I've been to Seattle a few times)...always bugged me the woman can't cook at all, how about Derek teaches her and feeds her roommates (a way to work out problems w/ Izzie ) - lasagne? pancakes? Kayaking - fits Derek's outdoorsy persona and the kayaking is really superb around that area (whales!) An evening at the book store - didn't care for Derek's choice as favorite book (& even less fanfiction that always has Mer reading bodice rippers), Seattle has some great bookstores, the tourist trip to the Space Needle (my husband was mortified when his drink came with a miniature space needle on top - I hate heights!), or a trip to Vancouver for Hockey (closest city w/ a hockey team), they can deal w/ 2 hotel rooms (he has plenty of $), and they can have an amusing trip to Wreck Beach (Vancouver's nude beach - time of year?).

I do like this story and I hope you will keep writing. I really like these characters and while I'm endlessly annoyed w/ the show and watch intermittently, I really enjoy well written stories that rounds out their personalities.

So please, more as you have time.
MissRe
2008-09-20 . chapter 33
Aw... that was an awesome first date. Very enjoyable for them both. :) Great job!
MissRe
2008-09-20 . chapter 32
That was cute. I loved the bowling - I personally suck at it, but it was a cute date for those two. I'm glad Mer is doing well at it. LOL Great job.
tartnoir
2008-08-05 . chapter 33
It's so refreshing to see a story where Derek is not some sort of perfect sex god! Thanks!
Marie5282
2008-08-01 . chapter 33
Indeed...fluff does a body good. And definitely does Meredith and Derek some good. I loved the date and how well it turned out. Amazing how those simple "first" kisses can sweep you away, and you did a fabulous job going through all of the date leading to it. Can't wait to see where you take this next.
starvingstudent
2008-08-01 . chapter 33
Great chapter, and ending to their 'first' date.
Looking forward to more!
AlliePinder
2008-07-28 . chapter 32
LOVED IT!
I just wish meredith would learn to trust derek, it must be exhausting for him all the time having to reasure her- but i guess she is right to doubt him sometimes.
keep up the great work, i love this story!
allie x
Marie5282
2008-07-13 . chapter 32
Oh I love surprises, so I hope there is one in their second date. You do an amazing job of working their psyches and all, figuring out what they must be thinking and what not. Can't wait for the next chapter, whether it takes a couple days or a few months. lol
littlemissliketofight
2008-07-13 . chapter 32
yay. happy meredith.
starvingstudent
2008-06-28 . chapter 30
LMAO- after reaidng your AN at the top, I was like 'they should go bowling'. seriously, i thought that. And Cristina and the coffee was priceless.

Okay, one more chapter left to read...looking forward to it.
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